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Read MoreA long timeagowhen I wasa teenager,I had awonderful,tender-heartedgirlfriend.She was patient.I was wideawake, and greenas a frog.She said,don't rub it sohard, you willhurt it.Think of it asa new toy youdiscovered.It's small, andyou need to becareful.It isn't apimple thatyou aretrying to...
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Thank you, my friend.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. One must master the secrets of the Love Button.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Lol. Thanks.
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You just nailed it .. Poetry that is .. not her you know what sir .. 😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Despite my blush, I loved this! It’s a delicate balance, that.
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Chère C.,
What a beautiful write!
Love it that you wrote it.
Love it even more that you’ve posted it.
I tried to single out which sentence drew me in.
But I can’t.
I’ll read it again tomorrow.
Until then….Kind regards, Gus
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good morning dearest Gus thank you your comment made me happy ❤️
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“Sanctuary in a smile”. After the “lust’ settles and there is just the warmth holding each other, it is the “smile” that says everything and how you can stay in that moment forever. It’s that smile that tells you you are home; where the momentary “lust” becomes more.
I enjoyed reading your poem Crimsin.
Curt
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hello dearest Kurt I’m happy that line spoke to your heart and I love what you took from this…it is a beautiful feelimg thank you graciously for such a lovely commen❤️t
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We love seeing you write of love, yes dark love is great love. Tight
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hello dearest Me good evening thank you graciously ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. What a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good evening dearest Damian thank you for such a beautiful comment ❤️
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read Moredwindles the eve as the day dies shortwinter weeps for no oneshiver in its cold embracecynical fact sarcastic lamentthere are few things I like lessthen a grey unforgiving daytormented wonder my delusions of granduerseeking the Gods of yesterdayto amuse...
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well this is quite grand. It’s like you were fighting the urge of feeling overwhelmed. So you wrote out an incantation to ward off the bad spirits? You slayed it!
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good evening dearest Styxian thank you graciously these are just feelings and fears I try to always write in a current mindset I’m happy it worked for you have a beautiful Evening ❤️
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Oh! This is good, Brenda. Right up my alley.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously it’s so funny to me it happens to us a lot and I swear I didn’t even peak at your poem till after ❤️have a great day…
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sometimes, even the sun cannot help when a “cynical fact sarcastic lament” is involved, but becomes magnified when the day is grey. and sometimes there are only vague answers to our ceaseless whys, and yet we cannot help but ask for them. Ironic isn’t it? we are born, we live, we die, and in between these events, there is only the moment and what we do with each one of them. Did we only exist? Or did we make a difference?
Thanks for your poem, Crimsin. I enjoyed reading it and where it led me.
Curt
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe Audio and Media files are being worked on. It is not a simple fix and will take time. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.
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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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