Powerful and courageous…

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Thanks Adira

This one has bones & flesh…& teeth. Good to see your words again

So insightful and well written

Much respect

Naaj

Oh my goodness, Tim. This is just amazing… a three-way allusion. Such a beautiful interchange of reference from one to the other… withdrawal symptoms, sex, literary elements. I see the analogies melded together, the physical and emotional relationships. This is really smart. I love how you use rhyme in this piece and the second person narrative approach, which makes it more powerful. Very talented.

Your words are sure fire penetration.
You’re a constant resonation ❤️ more please and please.

Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lovely..Nice work here.

Enjoyed muchly…

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Nice work here Fia. Great story that held my interest.

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your storytelling and dialogue my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian