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Good luck with that! LOL.
Cool little ditty, btw.
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Read MoreOn the margin of some pagesHeart felt feelingsExclamationsWritten largeJoy or sorrowWonderOr most preciousLoveEvoked by some now sacred passage Emblem redThe petals bedewedDancing among thornsFragrant the roseWhose beauty wounds Innocence lostIn sweetnessBut the sweet of the appleNot so sweet by half as...
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hello dearest Joe this is so beautifully wistful it reads as a melondious spell 💕
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Isn’t love a spell in truth? But you know, the romantic in you knows its true 🌼
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I agree with the comments above. This is tender and wistful. A very enjoyable read for me tonight.
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Thanks for saying so. I’m afraid I was birthed with a love for romanticism, esoterica, and nature – and the inability to fully capture what I want to say about either. Still, it doesn’t hurt to try.
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Love heals, love consumes, and sometimes breaks all we knew. 🌼
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Read MoreHow to maneuver on the siteTo upload your WorkClick on Write and Publish1 = You will see series, add series chapter number and edit seriesThis is for your stories that have more than one chapter and want to stay...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re welcome, Damian. Thank you
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Excellent breakdown.
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Thank you, Keith ;))
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Very helpful info. Thank you!
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Your welcome, Detritus
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Read MoreIt was you who brought a blade into our bed peeled the skin from grenades beyond barbed wire, torniquet fingered, but the only person bleeding was me From the Jubilee Line to Trafalgar Square you sweated love apartheid into my p(s)alms, how could you be...
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Not sure how to edit a submission, but somehow, in internet madness, the pen ultimatum stanza was omitted. As if anyone gives a fuck!
submarines tightly knotted in our gulf
diving for my very existence
when I should have been diving for pearls
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Hello, to edit, go to the dashboard, then click on the blue pen. then you can edit your work
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This sounds like the pain he felt was caused by her not caring. You cared more so you wrote about it. Nicly penned.
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It’s good to read your material again. Some writers whack me upside the head with their weighty words. And I don’t mind a bit. It makes me think. It makes me curious. That’s the best drug to me: Curiosity. So thank you for feeding us this drug of yours.
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Thank you Fia. In a nutshell, your interpretation is correct
Cheers Mark. I miss ‘chatting’ to the likes of Gary and your good self. For some reason (prob my IT incompetence) I can’t expand my messages on here. I’ll send my email.
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so sorry to read this resonates. beyond cyber madness I send the greatest hug. oo, you get to smell my latest aftershave too. sauvage. lol
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Read MoreI would be telling you a lie if I stated that I did not need a night out with my friends. Work is the usual hectic mess that it is. The peace and serenity I crave at home have...
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hello lovely Fia good evening you are an excellent story teller this is sexy and fun while being thrilling too 💕
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Thank you crimsin. That is so kind of you to say. I hope you like the rest of the story.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Amazing write, you’re a fantastic storyteller my friend. Dig this, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you;)) cuz
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very nice. lookin forward to next part.
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Thank you Ambjr;))
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Talk about a steamy build up the suspense here if just strong as can be. And the dialogue flows perfectly like a bunch of ladies on a night out at the bar. And then the guys lining up with drinks for the protagnist is a surpising and original plot line. Fantastic opening.
John
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Thank you ☺️
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