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thanks
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I get this. Jumping alone leaves the mind just as isolated as being alone. If nobody sees, are you real? Do you matter? I so get this. That ending is softly powerful
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exactly. thank you
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Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write with many layers my friend. I can relate.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks
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This is deep, and it quietly resonates. Great piece 253.
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appreciate it
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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
almost
I was gonna jump
but I needed someone to watch
so I waited
and while waitin
the moment passed
and I forgot why I climbed
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Read MoreI held the lanternTo the worldI couldn't see the lightFrom the darkLike a searcher in the wildLooking for the flameThat has the matchBut can't find a sparkI held the lanternTo the thresholdYou can only seeDistant in the nightI saw...
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wow dearest poet this is profound ❤️
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I really appreciate that Crimsin. Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write with depth and amazing flow my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks! I have been doing variations on the random word challenge that you can do on this site. One of my poet friends gave me lantern, velocity, threshold, and moss. And those words just sung to me.
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The goal changed and turned into something more quieter. Nice;)