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    grief

    find your way among the stars my sonyour sweet voice still lingersMa don't be sad...wept tears and those I keeponly God seesverses pent up with the ocean I need to releasefeeling deeply despite my numbing agentit feels like breathingsobriety...

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    Shadow Of Doubt

    Biased figures manipulate opportunities Power has reigned since the dawn of time Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities  False sincerity acted out in full pantomime   Dreams are aborted before even catching breath Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death   Programmed from a young...

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    Cadence And Measure

    The warmth of my tongue enters Kissing the lips of her parted petals Usual suspects repeat offenders Sweet moans as her rhythm settles   Lost in passion moving to the flow All the worries give way to pleasure Tension fades releasing angelic glow Melting in my cadence...

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    • Great title

      Pleasure journey

      BIG LIKE

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked the title as well, kinda stands out there, you dig? Definite pleasure journey. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.

    • I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!

      Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Ok, maybe I’m not as horrible at writing erotica as I thought I was. But you’re right, it’s not my most confident voice. lol. Anyhow, I’m not shutting them out like I used to, if I have an idea I entertain it now. Thanks for always being so supportive my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I like this style of erotica.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Reggie. So glad you liked the write my friend. I prefer this style as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • damn. excellent write.

    • Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
      “All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
      You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.

      xoxo

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. That’s a huge compliment, “Sexual Healing” and Marvin Gaye that’s stellar company. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Yeah, it was inspired. You wrote an erotica piece, then Willow had one, Then Meg, Then Mary, then Naaj. I’m sure there were others, it was like everybody was writing erotica that day. lol. So I followed suit. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    This Is How It Is Today

    In this cafe, with dirt for wallpaper. The heat is a bitch, and the fan in the ceiling is the worst— turning counter-clockwise. Sipping on my cup of coffee and milk. Too many flies, buzzing, fighting over throne, fighting over food, fighting over fly-chicks. Whatever they are fighting for— only that...

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    • Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.

    • Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀

      Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)

    • I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy

    • Thats what it was called back then. “)

    • Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.

    • I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)

      Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)

    • Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.

      • Bubble gum flavour id gross! I disagree. But hearing of cotton candy green seedless grapes, I think you are right about the bubble gum flavour in there. Hahaha.

    • LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?

      You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?

      You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.

      • Lol. I saw your poem after our fellow poet: visions_of_insanity’s recommendation for ice cream. It ended up another type of ice cream. Lol

        No. But I liked the reference. I had another poem that I have lost, where I referenced Nirvana’s Smells like teen spirit.
        Mosquito’s wings here symbolize inferiority. For their tiny wings comparing with flies. Idk why it came to my mind. But I used it.

        I didn’t know about the contest. The setting of this poem is in a cafe but the themes has nothing to do with coffee.

        I don’t remember this scene. I think I’ll rewatch it one day.

        Thank you for reading and for the comments, DK. “)

    • Powerful work, my friend.

    • Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
      Now, you see where mosquito wings can carry you!

      • Mosquito wings comes with mosquito responsiblities. The limitless ability of sucking. Hahaha

        Thank you, DK! “)

    • Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
      This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.

      j.

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