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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read MoreFrigid, calm front hides in northern winds,vast sky of my bedroom dims. Stream in wintericed over, mother's embraceletting go at bedtime. Still rainfall,sky's dark pillows,eyelids become anchors, smothering. The cold frontblanketing these damp lids,peacefully covers the coming storm.
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My mother was the opposite of this. Now though, she’s a different person. You have an exquisite way of expressing yourself, Daniel
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Introspective write, Daniel. Very powerful spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I admire the ease with which you express your inner world. Stoic, melancholy, honest and beautiful write. You are there in every word, thank you for the share!
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Okay, that is gut-wrenching. To lay there and live a slow death that you did not sign up for. Not right at all.
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Thanks for the thoughtful comment Fia.
It’s not right and it’s not wrong , it’s just the way it is.Like everything in life,even suffering is impermanent.
🙏
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Quite moving..thank you for sharing
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I’ve often felt that pain is preferable to apathy. That quiet passing out of space. This haunts & hurts. So often the case, & always hard
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First the Technical: Excellent consistency with meter, beautifully executed rhyme.
Composition: Incredible depth. As Willow noted, the piece reflects a falling away, a loss of touch and intimacy with no explanation. It’s a death of sorts, and you’ve painted it perfectly. Really well done.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI am on fucking firefrom the top of my head to the bottom of my feetThe fire started from withinBlood drips from every openingSizzling the moment, it hits outer skinI want to cryBut I can notI screamed so loudyou...
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Great write Fia.
I think we’d agree we aren’t our bodies.
Somewhere in the spaces between our cells , our atoms, is our consciousness…but that’s not us either.
We cling to our notion of self but really are non self.Nothing.-
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Thank you, Peter that is a profound statement. I believe we are more.
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Phenomenally penned, Fia. This was a powerful write my friend, I think our soul is our mind. It makes sense to me anyways. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That is definitely a thought. Thank you Damian
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The Heart & Soul is everything to a person’s existence. The brain is just there to put it into words. Great piece Fia. xo
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Read More“Too much sanity may be madness and the maddest of all,to see life as it is and not as it should be.”CervantesIf asked to tell of loveI could tell nothingFor I am a foolBut without foolsLove would cease to...
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Really seems to be a struggle to get the formatting to stay the same. Strike two. 😠
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Lol, take two, and take three to get the picture aligned. I make simple things hard. Its a gift.
But more importantly, thank you for your sweet compliment. Fools are getting rarer but players are out there in record numbers. Nice to meet another of the vanishing breed. 🌼
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I swear to all things fuzzy, if I could get that bookmark function to work, this would be well & truly bookmarked! Amen & pass the bottle! Beautiful…
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And what a functionally challenged group we are! But I’ll take word for deed, and kindly hand you the flask. Thank you, dear Willow 🌼
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Thanks reading and sharing your thoughts. Its true, “Those that have it at any level are lucky and blessed.”
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. You were a great writer then as well my friend. Twenty years ago huh? My high school days seem like a million summers ago. Appreciate you.
Damian