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Read MoreShe pulled his jumper up to her face,breathed him into the now empty space.Flopped in the chair that was clearly his own,not sad, not lonely,not even alone.Through the window his eyes once looked throughshe smiled and pondered the beautiful...
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Read MoreOnline warfare being waged everyday Some tech-pimp living in a wet dream Everything on the menu is pay to play Swinging pendulum picking up steam Broken hearts corrupted by confusion Unable to see through this cold illusion Artificial beast hides without disguise Cyborg sex doll disregards...
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Well this is musing. lol
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.
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Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No worries about the typing errors, it happens to all of us from time to time. It is best to search for the light in all things in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreSome scars got a paragraph, some, a page.I’m not much for back stories,I’m mostly conflictedwithin the epilogues.I’m a book bound in leather,there were no other options.Weathered by the ravages of sinupon my skinmany self-inflictedsome accidentand some inherited. There are no...
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Ohh there is so much in this piece. What got me it I wore the ancestors of these jeans…Damn what a line.
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LOL, you like how I used Wrangler jeans there? I happened to have on a pair as I wrote those lines. How ironic huh.
Thanks Fia. I hope NY is treating you well!
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Fine, it’s a tie. LOL.
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Hello Damian.
Yeah, why not a praying mantis. I think they are cool as hell actually. Ever since I saw my first one as a kid, as it was eating a caterpillar like a piece of corn on the cob, I’ve been amazed by them. Little green demons, lol.
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Dude, I have a lot of scars! And several tatts, ahem. -Been quite the life. Nowadays all is mostly mellow and I am thankful for it!
And you can jack my title. When I thought of it a couple of weeks ago, I told Del that I gotta use it somewhere! This write is the result.
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Amazing writing, dear Styxian. So authentic and pure! Scars are a sign that life has been lived. And I think that prayers never remain unanswered. But often we realize not before many times has passed, in which way the answer has manifested in our lives.
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This is so beautiful. You captured that moment and made me feel the loss but then the beauty of life. They existed.