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    Indulgences (Collab with Crimsin)

    Touching the dark I move closer to you,wicked indulgence, my crave for you,a lusty desire to seduce.  Captivated, you look at me with hungerthe night is jealousand pushes shadows onto my soul where you look deeply,and realize the demoness I am,provoking...

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    Hell on Wheels

    After lacing my running shoes,I strode down the sidewalklike a ship plowing through the sea.Five miles, I thought, do or die. In the distance, I heard the cara mile away tearing through streets. He was a nuisance.He drove a 1970 Chevrolet...

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    • Well, Damn, both things met their end. Very interesting poem. Nice;))

    • this reminds me of a pickup that used to race down my street you could hear him coming for miles but when he went by it was just a streak of an odd light I used to honestyly think it was Lucifer…it’s crazy…I really enjoyed this 💕

      • Thanks Crimson. Lets hope he doesn’t come back to haunt you with his spinning wheels.

    • Brilliantly penned, Tim. Love the flow and the imagery my friend, amazing storytelling as well. What a waste of a classic machine, assholes find a way to ruin everything they touch. lol. I’m also a car guy. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Father ’n Son

    One afternoon beneath a tree,my age no more than twenty-three,'pon Mary's supple, soft red cheekI placed a kiss that made me weak. In me, her charms endowed romancewith ev'ry quick, flirtatious glance.At every turn of every stroll,a kiss from her...

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    strange

    creative flaw or simple geniusmy soul is differentbut I wonder if similar qualities can be found in Godfrightful honesty, I see the same snag in humanitysome are streamlined and sleak to look at but get to know them and...

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      • hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously sometimes I wonder if my writes aren’t strange but you have to go as inspired I’m happy this spoke to you 💕

    • WHEN I SAY I FELT THIS, IT MEANS
      I THIS EVERY EVERY WORD OF YOUR VOICE…BUT THIS RIGHT HERE, OOUUFF!

      “truthfully I fail in this mission every day
      with small steps forward
      becoming the companion that was first desired”

      DAMN IT WOMAN!

    • that didn’t come out right, emotionally everywhere but you know what mean, ha!

      • hello dearest poet thank you graciously good evening I wasn’t sure how this one would be accepted I’m so happy it spoke to you 💕 and yes I think your comment was great and I understood 😊

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian for understanding I hate like for example when I am short tempered I have to work on this 💕

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