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Read Morehead's all up in a haze no one cares for me oh well, it's all i have to say telling myself it'll be ok morning will shine light some other day ups and downs, right now diving in a tailspin thinking i need to rethink...
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I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Warm sexy and intimate…..a smooth elixir no doubt
Much respect
Naaj
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This is a wonderful, intimate and tender poem , dear Crimsin! The imagery is amazing and cleverly chosen!
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Lovely Brenda. This is delicate and heartwarming. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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…an oasis of dreams. Fantastic, Brenda!
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Sensual, symbolic, and steeped in metaphor—this feels like desire rendered as prayer.
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Read Moredelicate understanding, I have made you feel forgottendreaded truth, I've been adrift and all the world is a blurI'm losing myself forgetting what I once knewyour face haunts my dreamsI've let you down and I can't change thatmy heart...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very introspective write my friend. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreRestless nights miles from sleepWitnessing the light fading fastWithout reward the price is steepCan’t outrun this troubled past Once crippled with silent ragePinned beneath a heavy stoneBattered heart in a dusty cageDesperate days spent all alone Hateful acts forged in painA...
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Fantastic, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is a dark piece, but it is really good. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know it’s kinda dark, it came out of nowhere. lol. I’m in a good mood still. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Excellent piece.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well look at you being all dark after Christmas:)
Each section had its own dark point of view.
I really enjoyed the stanza about evil hiding in the mundane
It reminds me of the saying in the Bible. Idle hands are the devils workshop.Great piece amigo!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Also my favorite stanza as well. I was kinda going for the idle hands vibe. Wasn’t meaning to be dark at all, this write came out of nowhere. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian very darkly powerful ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic piece of dark poetry my friend. Wonderfully executed.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It certainly spawned out of nowhere. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Heavy hitting vibe, bro This moves the mind down some chambers
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes you gotta just roll with the punches. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bittersweet piece, so beautiful and sad! I am glad that you reassured us that you are doing well , dear Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well I didn’t want anyone worrying about me, and I was happy while I wrote it. It’s kinda like a rain storm while the sun is still shining kinda vibe going on here. So bittersweet fits it perfectly. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This reads like a slow descent through psychological aftermath—the kind that doesn’t announce itself loudly but corrodes over time. The imagery stays grounded while the emotion escalates, especially the idea of evil hiding in the mundane. Quiet, heavy, and effective.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You got all that out of this write? lol. I’m just joshing you. Seriously though, your commentary really means a lot to me as well as your continued support my friend. You’re a gifted writer and I’m a fan of yours as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see why others see this is dark, but I read it more as a reflective piece on darker moments. Like sitting under moonlight and remembering full darkness of troubled days…having just enjoyed the warmth of a fire and full spirit. There are definitely elements that lean into darker aspects, but if we’re not peering into those corners, are we really paying attention, or are we just living in denial? To be all sunshine and daisies in the current environment is pure folly. I don’t see dark, I see the shadows that follow us wherever we go. The hope that we still find light. Follow that muse where it takes you, my friend. It never leads you astray
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always enjoy your commentary, this one is reflective in a sense. Darkness does hide in those corners always lurking in shadow and watching our every move. To believe it doesn’t exist is denial I agree 100% Appreciate you.
Damian
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this is extraordinarily noir if you don’t mind me saying .. just saying .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I don’t mind you saying at all, that’s cool with me. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian