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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
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Fia Naturie posted in the group The Art of Poetry
(My poem for the picture)
No meaning
I sit here thinking
Life has little meaning
Once I lived in luxury
Now I live in memory
What is the meaning of my life?
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
Hi, I just wanted to start off by saying thank you for joining. A singer that stuck in my mind, and I thought I would talk about is Toni Basil. She sang this song, “Mickey,” That came out in 1982and I could not get it out of my head as a kid. It’s funny how when I listen to the song as an adult, I get the meaning, but as a child, I was like…Read More
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There are a lot of songs out there that as a kid, I didn’t always get the meaning of until later in life. I remember the song well though. I was 7 years old when this came out. So I didn’t get the meaning at that age either. But the cheerleader outfit made sense, the lyrics are sang as if it is a cheer routine, with the handclaps also giving it…Read More
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More