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    Pirate 6

    Pirate 6 - Hurricane quatern   Upon ya’ like a hurricane Commissioned by me Letters Marque A Privateer, I’m on campaign To claim yer’ booty, and yer barque! My Jamaica sloop be fast Upon ya’ like a hurricane I’ll warn ya’...

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    • argh…onto the plank the sharks be waiting.
      A pirate I should choose to be, always at sea.
      Great work
      Regards
      James

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    Draw The Line

    I’ve been walking in my sleep Journeys across space and time Dark forces slowly start to creep Out of this chalk outline I climb   Riddles are their own mystery  Meaning is squeezed from words Every scandal with a long history  Was designed for thinning herds   Opportunity never...

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    Brokenheartsville: Slut Wife III

    I could hear Joe Nichols' "Brokenheartsville" blasting through the bathroom door as I reached for the handle. Dan had his phone volume on maximum and was harmonizing to the piece perfectly."...Here's to the past, they can kiss my glass!...

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    • First word and first reaction. Jesus.
      I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.

      • Conveniently, tomorrow is Sunday. Woops… that’s actually today in NY. I’ve got 3 minutes.
        So, anyway… I hope that means you like it.

    • Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • It makes me happy that you noticed the wedding flashback because putting that in there was sort of a pinnacle to the experience. I didn’t mean for it to be a contrast so much as a reference to guilt and obscenity, but then, you’re right. What could be more opposite than matrimony and slimy bathroom infidelity?

        You always make me think, Damian.

    • Hell yeah. Publish this stuff Meg!!!

      • Yeah, I can definitely see this in Barnes and Noble. I’m glad you like it, though! Thanks for following me on this.

        xoxo

    • Wow. You nailed this one.

    • Ohhh, goodness-ME!

      How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!

      Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
      Onward, UPward! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • You know, I never thought of this as ‘consummation’, but I’ll give you that interpretation! I’m super pumped that you like what you see, and I hope you can imagine what you read adequately enough to take that to bed.

        I love your comments, Richard!
        xoxo

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    melancholy

    darkness trips my vision in the morose emotionseeking shelter in the deep notes of melancholywith lost hopes and memoriescoveting the moments of solace in between my thoughts wander the darkI collect shadows in the gloomwith tears wept and feelings...

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    • Everything fading until there are no colours left at all…..this is the truth.

      • hello dearest Benny that is what happens I’m okay but a part of me has changed thank you for the understanding 💕

    • No place like home. I wonder if the moon is recycling our souls. Sometimes everything looks correct painted in black. My complete & utter condolences. ~hugs~

      • thank you dearest poet for the love my garden turned cold and dark I gave this painting to my son’s wife I don’t know if I made the right choice but she understood 💕

    • I feel your loss in your words, and the picture is a good representation of how you feel.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. The words work well with the painting my friend. It does represent how you feel. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • This is absolutely fantastic, girl. Your painting is incredible too.

    • You paint this scene with vivid color.

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    My First Big Loves: Summer of 2005 and 2007

    Prologue    How it all started and was lost...        I have always had an addiction to sex. Before I lost my virginity to my first big love in high school, it existed as an obsessive thought. Going further back, I...

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    • The prologue, set up the expectation of what we are about to experience in this story was done well. But I have to admit this journal entry of a story was eye opening. This is an enjoyable read and the vulnerability of the piece is good.

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