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    emerge

    covering myself with shadows I move quietlyso not to disturb the restless spiritsthe ones that reside in my soulanger, sadness and melancholyeach with feelings of their ownmy soul carefully listens to them with a heaviness of beingwhen they are...

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    • Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.

      xoxo

      • thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕

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    sinful deed

    twas daylight that ushered the darkness inwhen she on a sleepy day did sinsecreting my thoughts and dreaded deedon halted breath my wickedness shownsilently the storm brew coming without warningclouds of mistrust formed in the eyes peering at memy...

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    • Oh wow… I’d call this epic poetry because it tells a story. It’s also confessional.
      I love this kind of naughty stuff, Crimsin. Riveting!

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you dearest Damian yeah just a bit of fiction I appreciate you too 💕

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    blue

    in the deafening noise I cloak my hurtmy pain is not for public viewit is a heavy weight to smile when you're saddarkness lingers in all I dodepression stalks my stepsaltered perceptions nothing is the samea bite of food...

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    • Described ‘the black dog’ perfectly.
      Sleep well
      🙏

      • hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously for reading and commenting with such an apt description of depression I’d never heard that expression before 💕

        • I think it was how Winston Churchill described his depression.Most folks down under use it as a euphemism for depression.
          Take care 😘

    • You really nailed this diagnosis, girl.
      I felt kind of rough after reading it. Everyone can relate to this.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Make Me Bleed

    Fully resuming our bad cop strip search routine, Dan pulled out the shower head that was attached to an extension. He adjusted the spray to a power pulse setting that exploded up my cunt like an atomic douche, the vibrations...

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    • Vivid and sharp. Excellent.

    • Passionately penned, Meg. This write really showed off your detail to imagery, backed up with a pretty big vocabulary by the way. You have a way with words my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • hello beautiful Meg this is raw and intriguing I wonder if you are like me getting really aroused as I write…I loved the details in this it brought forward some fantastic imagery 💕

      • Sometimes I do get aroused when I write, girl. I like to hear you do the same! Thanks for checking this out!

        xoxo

    • “DANG, LADY MEGAN!” 😳

      About time I’m certain there’s no way you could possibly more thoroughly express sexual haute, vividly erotic/vulgarly succulent imagery in irresistibly arousing detail, emotionally captivating ambience, unending facets of excitement, human vulnerability, fevered addictions (on-‘n-on one could easily fill a virtual tome describing your penship’s incomparably astounding wonders) … you come along and show me up as the liar I am for misjudging the endless dimensions of your creative literary capacity.

      This chapter is simply as sexually gross as it is abundantly arousing … you’ve either an enthrallingly wondrous sexual life or an unfathomably deep imagination, and I suspect (or, willingly imagine) “both” is closer to factual, than not.

      Truthfully, Dear Megan, I’ve yet to read a more enchantingly captivating, well-rendered story than these amazing chapters to this progressive saga of “A SLUTWIFE’S CONFESSIONS”.

      A genuinely smitten fan … truly yours! ⁓ Richard🖌

    • Dearest Richard,
      As always, I’m blushing with elation that you find this so captivating. I just want to sit on your face and keep writing till you blow your wad. I can seriously be very candid in my accounts because I’m pretty candid in reality. I see a lot of shit as a nurse. Some things are just gross, and other things are only gross to some people. I keep getting amazed how guys can be turned on by gross things.

      I love your comments!
      xoxoxo

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