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Read MoreThe carriage sped on for hours, as if they were in some race against time. By the time the orange of dusk painted Hilda's face in a carroty hue, the carriage again came to a sudden stop. Hearing the driver descend from his box, he...
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thank you dearest Adagio most graciously 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you most graciously for such a kind comment 💕
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Hoi hoi
If a poet can be tender, can a poem be tender to?
A declaration of love.
And the four last sentenses the cherry on the cake.
Love it a lot!
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hello dearest Gus good evening I do believe a poem can be tender thank you for your lovely thoughts on this 💕
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thank you graciously lovely Mary 💕
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good evening beautiful poetess thank you graciously 💕
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It is so very human. Gia protect your vulnerability.
Be well-
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hello Jim thank you for a thoughtful and caring comment 💕
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Hi Crimsin. You are very welcomed.
I love your pen name too.
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thank you Jim I chose it a long time ago… I should have had it trademarked but oh well 💕
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Is it too late? 🙂
If I ever see another using it, I’ll threaten a law suit. be well
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Read MoreDeath came quickly, I remember. But not quick enough.I suffered. Suicide is painful in so many ways,to myself, to others. And for those others,deep emotional pain followedand internal scars inflicted by my selfishness!By my self-pity!By my own choice! I say this, don't do...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Also an important message my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...
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Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian! Appreciated! “)
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Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
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External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.
Thank you Fia! “)
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Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.
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Thank you brother! I appreciate it! “)
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Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3
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This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)
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This is deeply, thought-provoking.
I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.
It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.
Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x
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Read MoreYour soul has withered, your conscience dead, your eyes don't cry, you have a heart of ice, your face so pale, so clammy everywhere, every word you utter to me filled with vulgarity... gives me violent shivers... Why vicious? You stole my heart and never gave it back, still you try...
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Bold… resonating write…
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Vintage Crimsin, at her best. Love it.