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Thank you for taking time to read and comment M.E!
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Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work.
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Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
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hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Amazing piece Crimsin!
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hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
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You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
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hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
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Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕
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Read MorePoem: I never imagined that tenderness could be so violent. Delicately imposing and so unrecognizable in its egocentric mask-face. But, as always, you were there to show me the empty stage behind the curtains. My comment on my poem. This brief poem...
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Thank you my dearest Adira! I keep on trying my best evrytime.
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hello dearest Par this is very deep and must have been hard for you to face great write 💕
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I am here you are there we are all around. Thank you very much.
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Wow, PAR! This is really good. I have to say I’ve never seen anyone self-analyze so meticulously as you’ve accomplished here in this series of pieces. For me, the word ‘violent’ in your poem may be slightly overbearing and excessive under the circumstance of your more extensive description. Perhaps ‘forceful’ or ‘foreboding’ … though I do see the intent to create shock through contrast.
You’ve managed to describe something that I’ve never paused to ponder… the power of silent observation, allowing the ribbons to unravel themselves until the package lies fully open and exposed. There’s a self-loathing quality to your piece, but it’s far deeper than that. It emulates the respect and honor provided by a student to his teacher.
Exceptionally intellectual and yet warmly appreciative. Well done.
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Thank you, comments are the most defying things for me as a poet, they ring so many bells and so much silence.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This is so profound with deep introspection my friend. Wow, you never fail to amaze me. Fucking magnificent write! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey, Damian, thank you for always being there…
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Always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello PAR. I took a few moments to sign back onto starsrite and read your poem. This is one magnificent journey. WOW! Your a true artist and a real, authentic person. Your gift of expression and writing never seems to fail. Well said and marvelously executed.
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hank you, Keith, for your words about my words… in a world that needs more and more significance. Appreciate you always.
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Oh wow, I like this! You picked a great beat for the lyrics. I’m like neon after listening to that!
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Thank you! Happy to make you glow haha.
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Nicely done, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, thank you Damian. That really means a lot to me!
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I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)