Thomas this speaks to me of deep abiding beauty in a timeless land. The imagery of the robin just learning to use its wings taking flight on the Western wind is just sublime. Loved reading this tonight.

John

Awesome write, Thomas. It reminds me of Tangerine trees and marmalade skies.

Excellent Thomas 😎👍

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Speaking facts here, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

It flew though! Mine often slam into trees at least once. I love the way you gave the pen over & let it go

I agree with you, Thomas…that some poems actually write themselves, especially the ending, which I find to be quite surprising when the moment offers itself to me. I especially loved the eloquence and poetic nature of a “tangerine sky”. Wow, now why haven’t I ever thought of that? Good to have another transplant from the WC at the helm. Good seeing you, Thomas!

Good to see you. Thanks. Hello Poetry is another fantastic site.

This gives me old Korean movies with the monks or a person taking notes, sitting and writing, and people ignoring them as they go about having their conversations.
Interesting

Tremendous work, my friend.

Nice, pleasant work.

I see it as concern for a world that may be in trouble or a culture that may be disappearing.
Nice one Neville. (Relic)

I’m not sure if I got You right here, but in my mind I see it as the fear of writer’s block, maybe because I see myself here with the white pages waiting for words… Good Coffee Saturday ☕

That was sweet. Love forget me nots

Beautiful.

I love how you selected this little detail and penned a passionate piece around it. It’s the little things like this that motivate everything.

I enjoyed this. It’s a good read

Thanks for reading a large piece.
I am very glad you liked it.
It’s a rough idea.
We are all human.

Regards James

If you follow Rick Beato you must be a music enthusiast.
I have seen Rick discussing the impact of AI in the music industry and even he has said it’s getting harder to identy human from digitally created music.
The same can be said for any ‘writing’ site….who is doing the writing.
I for one, would never post an AI produced piece without declaring it.
Sometimes, I’ll write a piece, get AI to tidy it up and then post both versions and let others decide which is better.Usually, it’s the AI free version .
Its a crazy old world.🌞

Hell yeah, Beato, has a great show. Appreciate you.

Damian

There a few things in life I detest more than AI .. and I can only think of four members of my own species that fall into that category .. All of whom are supposedly world leaders and one of which has no intelligence whatsoever, let alone artificial .. 😎👍I found this to be a compelling read which could prove write for further debate .. Neville

I fear this is going to be a case of “the internet is forever”. Once it’s been used to train an AI, which somehow it seems like it already has, I don’t think deleting it will remove it from its “memory”. We’re entering a brave new world of technology and I’m quickly starting to feel very unprepared for it.

Powerful and poignant