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    The Great Deceiver

    Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation  As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment  Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose   Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see   Face...

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      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is really good. Damian <3

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Powerful work. Superb.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.

      The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍

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    Face The Storm Pass

    Rest now… and let the storm pass. Imagine a bedcover hovering over youand it peacefully covers the coming storm. Rain patters the blanketand you feel it become damp,yet you're shielded from another storm.   Rest now… and uncover yourself. Imagine what...

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    • Poets bare their natures. Right now mine is stormy with anger.
      I don’t want to hide under the blanket.
      Like you say….too much going on and the blanket is too damp to ignore.
      I relate to your poetry, Daniel.
      j.

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