-
![Profile picture of Ghosteen]()
Ghosteen wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreBefore Time was once apple skinned and quartered still hanging from the tree, as if a disembowelled astronaut hanging from moon gallows At the hill’s summit we knelt among the dead, ate the rancid gifts from their bodies flesh of berries, mouths and holes of skin, until the sky darkened...
3 Comments-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Yeesh! I’m hoping Del skips this one! (we’re planning a ’27 wedding). lol.
Your poetic strength is maybe lost on some readers, because you go deep like this. There’s geometry in this creation, angles and dark corners. I can take the weight, though, when reading your powerful lines. Because there is reward in finding the meanings and how we perceive it all. Outstanding depth here. -
![Profile picture of Ghosteen]()
As always Mark, I’m so pleased someone gets me.
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Amethyste wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreHe knocked on my virtual windowKnock knockI just wanted to say helloA smile on my faceA light in my eyesUgh ugh ummmHello back dear friend.
6 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
There was a series I liked with cyborgs that I got hooked on. this reminds me of it. Really good Amethyste
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you Fia.
-
-
![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Hello out there, in there. 🙂
Be well dear Poet-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Hello back.
-
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you dear.
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
New encounters are exciting. But we can’t help to subconsciously be cautious.
This reminds me of that.
-
-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreYou can't know onewithout knowing the other.No cold without warm.No dark without light.No skinny without fat.No wet without dry.No ugly without pretty.No big without small.Nature doesn't make opposites.It just iswhole and unbroken.The mountain doesn’t name itself tall,the tide doesn’t...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
It seems that we need them both to see each other’s point of view.
-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Thanks for your considered comment.
I only put the political line in to highlight the point that one exists because of the other.
My politics are on the left because that’s where I see less selfishness but in truth there is only a bees dick between most political parties.
Business runs the show.And on a whim.
I think I like you 😜
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreGolf is a game of recovery; there'san eagle and sometimes a seagull to keep alonely man company, an albatross but no bluebird.Life is a game of recovery. We all want in.Whether it be the cup or Heaven, myguess is...
9 Comments-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
its a whole new ball game isn’t it .. You are a braver man than me tho’ Thomas I daren’t try anything new these days .. I’m either stuck in a rut or stuck in my ways .. Just keep using that shovel tho’ mate and you’ll have a hole in one in no time .. 👍
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you, my friend.
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I do know some of these terms. I get antsy watching golf. You do need concentration and a good swing. I liked this
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thasnk you.
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you. You’re the best.
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you sir.
-
-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
I can relate, because I am a super putt-putter! LOL.
This write is full of vivid detail for sure. And concise but fully delved. Perhaps to be printed and posted at every club house across the country…before the hackers take to the greens. LOL -
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Yes. Thank you, my friend.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
I remember this song well. Tremendous work. You nailed it.
-
![Profile picture of redzone]()
Hi Thomas, it is a great song! Nice to see you here, and welcome your comment. Thank you!
-
-
![Profile picture of redzone]()
She was “tasty”…er… perhaps I should have kept that to myself. ;0) In the end, though, she was the one who consumed me. Isn’t this the way all ‘obsessions’ end?!!
Mary, searching for and posting this older poem, was worth getting the comment you left. I’m glad you “loved everything about it.”
-
- Load More Posts
I always like it when someone starts with an object, “Apple,” and ends with the same object. This is good. I enjoyed it.