Very good. Nice Halloween vibe here

Frightening and jolly at the same time.
Much enjoyed.
Regards James

Thank you. I’m glad you like it.

Before we die, we need to read the book of longing. well damn. I need that book. Nice spill.

Being too kind is gonna get you everywhere, every time .. Bless you Fia .. Neville 😎👍

Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend.

“still tapping

on the bedroom

window

in the key

of F sharp minor ..”

Always dig a write that mentions music. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow. Great write. It is what it is! I too like the musical reference.

Be sure to read her this longing, because I’m pretty sure she would join the ride…. passionate and hot!

I love the description of his voice. velvet soft. I can hear that in my ear

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tremendous work. Gripping.

Hauntingly penned, Tim. Logic over valor my friend. Excellent write you’re a great storyteller. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is good and had me laughing with the pedal to the metal.

Tim, this took me into the haunted rooms of that house and feeling the disquieted vibes as I read. Truly a master work of short story telling. Your descriptions of the broken window and dusty curtains made the scene come alive for me in full visual effect. As the story unfolded I enjoyed the narration and how it pulled me into the story. Truly great ghost story telling that had me fascinated unto that great ending where the message appears on his phone.

John