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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my “Magic of Poetic Voice” submission
The Beast Confession
Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I need you to sit and understand me a bitI wandered into a space without time
Alone with my thoughts
Never hoping that someone could be…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Read Moredriven insaneblue and greysleek bodycobra grillheadlightscutting nightsengine roarsdual pipes wheels rollchrome artdescribingintricate fleshfingeringher six speedclutchingthat lust horsepowerequalsfrictionloving torquesport bodyinvitingthe curvestop down road readysoft highwaydrag stripstarting linemy mustangyour corvettewe embraceunique styles Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2019
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The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are welcome my friend 😊
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Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well Damn Sam I would have another heart attack waking up and finding out that I was caught out there. Nice story
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now you know how I feel exactly …
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I learned from the best.. she is always on fire… her name is Harriet… I don’t know if you know her !!!
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Read MoreGirl, your silver-tipped prose was going to haemorrhage me word circus turned me to clown In octagon of mirrors in the gallery cafe where lipstick palimpsest on coffee cups colour rouge all the shades of desire, I viewed her nipples from eight different angles through the ‘God?’ emblazoned on her thin t-shirt, reflected to crack’d promises who dared walk on broken ice? China...
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That was never enough? Very descriptive. Makes me wonder what would be enough. Nice piece
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thanks fia
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This is my Magic of Poetic Voice submission
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The Beast Confession
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·Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I n…Read More