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Read MoreDay in, day out the same routine Rolling a stone up a hill, steep and tall Condemned to watch its fateful fall No light at the tunnel's end to be seen Keep it rolling, it's your job Keep it rolling, up to the top You...
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Thank you very much, dear Peter!
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Well done, my friend.
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Thank you for the recognition, dear Abbey!
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Excellent piece Elke. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
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And it’s always a pleasure to read your kind comments, dear Keith. Thousands of thanks!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Elke. Excellent write my friend, it has a lyrical vibe to it. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re kind comments always succeed in making me blush. Loads of thanks, dear Damian!
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What a wonderful thing to read today. The routines of work life do indeed wear us down. Although I tend to daydream much of the day away. I usually have very busy days at work. But, I try to take little breaks to maintain my decent mood the best I can. Your write here is a great testament to how to deal with that.
Awesome result, Elke.-
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, dear Styx! You are absolutely right, breaks are equally important as work. And daydreaming is by far more than an escape from reality. It can be a real fountain of creativity and inspiration . When you don’t wreck your brain was tasks and problems, you are mine is open to receive new ideas. This way, serendipity helped the most brilliant ideas to manifest in reality. Go on like this, it’s a great attitude!
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I have to apologize for the typing errors.
One sentence should read : when you don’t rack your brain… You are open to receive new ideas
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You capture the grind and the small awakenings with quiet grit—the stone never stops, but neither does the heart.
The contrast between monotony and fleeting beauty lands like a soft punch; it lingers in the chest.-
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, Thomas! I’m glad that my poem spoke to you.
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“Keep it rolling, do your duty
Yet be aware of life’s beauty” Priceless!! Well done, Elke! “)
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Read MoreHer feet scorchesthe Earth,with every blistering step. Resentment within herselffor all those long nights she wept. Hating herself for losing control of things;In her mind on a loop— “They will pay.All they do is,Lie,steal,fuck,and scheme.” But now...now,she is a walking revelation. Her heart,...
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Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it
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Thank you, sweet Fia. xx
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This is incredible, my friend. Written with emotions, that could light a match…smoking a cigarette.
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Handle the flame with care, my dear friend. xx
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Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
And what a lovely piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus-
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Gus, it is always a pleasure..thank you for your kind words.
I hope all is well! xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those who get it, just get it. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words my friend.
xx
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Thank god he came … or we would all have been fucked … nicely done
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Sam thank you for reading! And yeah, or maybe it would have been enjoyable .. I guess we will never know now 😉 xx
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Read MorePiss & Shit in your mouthSnow cone beef treats made at my house Mouth pie cream vanilla wafers wait for my tongue Ice cream fribble on my nippleSoda flavored onion pickles I like to hold change in my belly button Holy guacamoliaBatman flavored...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Do you have a food fetish? lol. Don’t answer I don’t wanna know that bad. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love food and I love sex. Put them together and you may have something there my friend. But this was taken from the outer reaches of my mind. Thanks!
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Good that I have already eaten breakfast. Your creativity doesn’t know any bounds, and this is great. Well done, my friend!
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Hello Elke. I thank you for the comments, always!!
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This one’s wild, unhinged, and gleefully grotesque—like a carnival mirror reflecting chaos.
It’s shocking, sure, but it wears its own madness proudly; your voice doesn’t flinch, and neither should the reader.-
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Thanks Thomas. Let’s eat!
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Read MoreIllusion or realitySane or insanityDemons running through my veinsThere's nothing I would ever change Network damage - Connection SplitInput - Output - Complete Shit Illusion or realitySane or insanityHarsh stories & poems run through my brainInside my body, a madman reigns It's...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. You gotta draw a line somewhere. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Well, you should not have to give that part of you up. Keep writing.
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Appreciate the feedback Fia.
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Read MoreA cold January nightit changed his whole lifeShe'd not been long his wifebut during the night she diedHelpless - he stands there all aloneLonely - a long hard way to go When they first met the angels sangIt was love...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you Damian.
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Thank you my friend. You rock!!
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Its amazing how love can cut so deep that you can’t take the knife out if you tried. Love this
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Love this.
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