ahh… great to be reading you yet again my dear adored versatile prolific poet n my deep friend, loveable ev Keith:)

& yep this is a short sweet power packed write of yours.. that inching in nearness… that magnetic zing in that pulling in space.. that electrifying gentle touch n the massaging wetness of an aromatic shampooing act… aw you leave me absolutely wordless n stunned in this immense masterpiece so concise .. sensual n ah that stretch of peaking imagination that follows all .. is undeniably pure ecstasy.. whatev impure shade it may be filled in;)

n yes, you are there! that final closure of a topsy turvy twist keith-wise;)

to be honest, all along my maze of mind was wandering wondering over the laters & metaphors of this all, hidden or explicit;)

great take dear One xo

my first SR read here & yes this is epic:)

light love ev

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dear keith, co ing back to starsrite after sooo looong . Bad of me i know.. but will try to be here to read all your poets brilliance & hopefully will do some some scribblings of myself 🙂 Light love xx

Great title

Pleasure journey

BIG LIKE

Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.

I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!

Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥

I like this style of erotica.

damn. excellent write.

Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.

xoxo

This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))

From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!

Thank you.

Thank you.

I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.

It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Sounds hot and sticky. A summer day.

Chewing gum, or strawberry. My favorite flavors since childhood. 😀

Thank you, Adira! Your comments make my day! “)

I swear I know these moments. Drags & weighs the body down. This is a doozy

Thats what it was called back then. “)

Cleverly penned, M.E. Relatable write my friend, we’ve all been there. Appreciate you.

Damian

Don’t want to be there but you forced me in this place with your detailed writing. DAMN GOOD! If you want an ice cream cone, go to Dampkitten’s poem “Poetspeak Sweet”. There you’ll find an ice cream cone and a whole lot more.

I apologize. It got to be written and vented. Thank you for reading and liking it! “)

Hmm..I’ll check it out rn. Thanks “)

Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.

LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?

You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?

You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.

Powerful work, my friend.

Holy Shit, you won! Congratulations, M.E!
Now, you see where mosquito wings can carry you!

Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.

j.

You’re not getting the job to write Hallmark cards

BIG

I agree with, Speak. I busted out laughing when I read his comment. Great write, Keith. You oughta start your own card company, your motto could be: “I write what you’re thinking, but don’t have the balls to say.” Has a nice flow to it, doesn’t it? Appreciate you.

Damian