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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.
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hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️
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Hi Crimsin:)
Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. HahaI’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.Thanks for stopping by!
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Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
We are way too goofy. But I love it.
Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
April 29th!-
Hey big sexy!
Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
After we got off FaceTime I started this write.You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
And I keep peeking at you too!I can’t wait to be
face to face
flesh to flesh
All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
Love ya babe
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi H!
I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
And I have seen your brain!
It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
You should have a little spice daily chica.
At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!Love ya and miss ya!
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
12th in Emptiness, Oblivion, and the Breeze That Knows Too Much
April 12th rises
like a hollow bowl.
A day carved out of absence,
light as a rib,
quiet as a room
after everyone has left
but the air still remembers
their names.This is the day of emptiness
not the cruel kind,
not the collapsing void,
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Some people grow with an appreciation for their maker, and others drift through life. Good one, and a lovely photo. 🙂
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I love how this whole piece is written. From beginning to being continued!
As people I feel we continue to evolve.
Even when we aren’t looking.
Awesome write!
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Styxian wrote a new post
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Your writing is always very deep and this is no exception. Your details of the connection between them is profound indeed and based in love and a memory of him that will never be lost or corrupted. Any comment I can give on this is not enough. There’s so much said here. Great writing, Styx.
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Thank you Tim. It was a lot of work, including jotting down little notes while working at my job thursday and friday. I do maintenance at an older apartment complex, very busy most of the time. But, the creative ideas wait for no work. LOL.
I know that this write, because of the title, the header picture, etc, will keep many people away. But I hope those who do read it get something positive from it. There are several gospels not in the bible, some called the gnostics, that tell much different stories from the traditional ones picked to be in the King James version. The version of Mary M being His wife is in some of them. So, who really knows by now.
And, I am beating myself up over a part three! Do I, do I not. Grrrr.
I sincerely appreciate your generous comment, Tim. And what you did say is enough. It is awesome.
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How to start with this. This is excellent!
Your interpretation of how she adored and suffered his life and loss is truly amazing. A weaving journey through her thought process. How the world can exhaust even the strongest of spiritual character but away from prying eyes, he remembers the blessings of also being human.These are gems baby! Honestly:)
Needs to be put in your book!-
You knew how much these two writes were beating me up. Lots of editing and hacking, even a few minutes ago. I had a very specific vision of what I wanted it to say. I think I succeeded, after all the edits of course.
And, the part three…. I dunno. I’m going to chill on it awhile.
I am so fortunate to have you in my creative journeys. Because you do the same things and can relate to it all.
I love you immensely!
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So, when I finished reading this, I took a deep breath and said, “Jesus!”. And then I laughed to myself, because I was only saying it as an exclamation about your writing and not as a statement of the subject… LOL.
Anyway, this is just beautiful. Not much more I can say. Thank you for sharing it.
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LOL !! I purposely avoided using his name in any form. Because it is about Mary’s feelings in dealing with it all. The very human aspect of someone dealing with such a weight added to a relationship. Like dating someone famous, etc., then losing them. Obviously it is on a grander stage. But being human has its basic emotions for all.
Its so good to see ya! Rock star!
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Reach out
There are things I wanted to show
There are things I could not let go
When my light is finally out
I’m in the shadowReach out , reach out
You’re in my heart
Reach out
Whenever you feel you’re falling apart
Reach out
I will always be there for you….I’m here for you
You’re never alone, its true
Wherever I am is a hom…Read More1 Comment - Load More Posts
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Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.