infinite dark beheld me
while humming a tune he sung over me
happily creating a new fascination
someday I would be a companion
utterly charmed by him
he sang of grace and commitment
growing me from nothing but dust
enveloped in His womb I grew
from nothing was something
cultivating his visions into art
the dark spoke inside Him
some of his dreams disturbed His reverie
but he pressed forward
a hint of sunshine to sparkle
a bit of blue to imagine sky
a personlity to reflect aspects of mine
children of the dawn sent evolving
he takes our tutelage very seriously
he admonishes me daily on how to carry myself
when I am less than he says oh yes you remind me of me
building my confidence, we agree
gluttony is difficult to manage
I query so we are a fat people?
he says no we must learn to exercise control in all areas
looking around me I sigh imagining the day I was formed
and what I am becoming
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously β€οΈ
Some people grow with an appreciation for their maker, and others drift through life. Good one, and a lovely photo. π
hello dearest Tim good morning I grew in appreciation when I started to hear him myself not when people at the church told me what he was saying and I never found him I found while contemplating on nature thank you so much for the lovely comment β€οΈ
The becoming is a beautiful thing, Brenda. This one made me smile ππ§‘
hello lovely Willow I’m happy to bring you a smile thank you my friend β€οΈ
I love how this whole piece is written. From beginning to being continued!
As people I feel we continue to evolve.
Even when we arenβt looking.
Awesome write!
hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously I believe it too we are in a constant state of evoluion and growth no matter how many lives we have you can witness it in old souls and those you can tell are here for the first time…I deeply appreciate you sharing β€οΈ
Dear B,
For me, the presence of oneβs higher power guiding us when weβre willing to receive is pulsating throughout this write. I kept thinking throughout my life whenever I wanted to do something differently but was spiritually guided in a different directionβ¦typically I was grateful it didnβt happen the way I wished. Your piece of growth and gratitude is ever present in this write and your accompanying picture is beautiful. H xx π·
hello beautiful Honoria good afternoon I’m very grateful to be led and know I”m not alone I didn’t always know that and it was scary… I’m happy you have felt that guiding spirit as well thank you graciously for the love have a beautiful day β€οΈ