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    Fia Naturie wrote a new post

    She turns 30

    Wake up to a face Your face The current face Not the face you remember   Memory can distort reality Reality is a bucket of ice water Even the eyes change Once showed hope is now resigned   Truth is It is not the face that is disheartening It is the...

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    • hello beautiful Fia I’m glad I no longer get gazes I wrote a poem about that I’m waiting to post it…it’s titled invisible…I don’t feel old even though I’m fifty six and the world wants to tell me I’m old…no she is not old just no longer a teen… great write ❤️

    • This is a great write.
      The reality is we all age. It’s not so bad.
      But realizing that comes with wisdom and learning to embrace the life you’ve lived and where you are mentally.
      I’m happy at 51. You couldn’t pay me to be in my thirties.
      Hell no. Hahaha

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write that we can all relate to my friend. I’m happy where I am, don’t wanna go back in time. lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.

      Damian

    • You have touched upon a very important topic with your beautiful and meaningful poem, dear Fià. Unfortunately, our Western society is obsessed with a cult of youth. In other cultures, by contrast, older people are more likely to be associated with wisdom and life experience. Fortunately, the ‘army’ of women who are not buying into this youth cult based on outward appearances is growing larger and larger. We only age in years, but we mature in terms of our life experience and our wisdom; our faces reflect the beauty of a life well-lived.
      ​Here’s to us older women!

    • My sister casually announces she’s fat from time to time and she’s smaller than me. Throws the brain when someone declares themselves to be in a deficit but they still have more than you. I find it funny that I’m actually more content with my aging than I was in my youth. Guess it’s what we take from the life we live. Good write, Fia

      • What got me is the announcement of I’m old. Not a grey hair, laugh lines nothing. Me being me I said I must be decerped. lol
        She caught on. But damn. Thank you Willow

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    Chaos in Color

    I've got so many sidesinside and outside using chaos as my guideshowing me the waybecause babyI'm everything all encompassing  mixing it uptearing shit upI'll bring my shadesI'll bring my coolI'll bring my teethYou bring the warbecause babyI'm a fucking...

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    • Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.

    • Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
      I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
      Hey have a great day!

    • Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.

      • Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
        I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
        It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
        And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.

        Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
        Rock on!

    • hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️

      • Hi Crimsin:)

        Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
        explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. Haha

        I’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
        You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
      We are way too goofy. But I love it.
      Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
      April 29th!

      • Hey big sexy!
        Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
        After we got off FaceTime I started this write.

        You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
        And I keep peeking at you too!

        I can’t wait to be
        face to face
        flesh to flesh
        All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
        Love ya babe

    • (I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)

    • Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
      ❤️k

      • Hi TK!

        It’s so awesome to see you on my page!
        How have you been!

        Yes, I was in a mood hahaha

        Thanks for your snaps on my write amiga:)

    • Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hi Damien!

        Nope you are not alone! For me music opens doors in my mind when I’m writing.
        It really does. It brings different tones or vibes to my write. Hope that makes sense:)
        And please know I appreciate you too!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌

      • Hi Willow.

        It was fun. Sometimes when writing it’s also just as important to catch our adrenaline too.
        My pulse was pumping with this write. Hahaha
        Hope that makes sense!

        Thanks for stopping by!

    • Dear A,

      Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
      Just fabulous. H 🌷

      • Hi H!

        I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
        And I have seen your brain!
        It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
        You should have a little spice daily chica.
        At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
        I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!

        Love ya and miss ya!

  • 12th in Emptiness, Oblivion, and the Breeze That Knows Too Much

    April 12th rises
    like a hollow bowl.
    A day carved out of absence,
    light as a rib,
    quiet as a room
    after everyone has left
    but the air still remembers
    their names.

    This is the day of emptiness
    not the cruel kind,
    not the collapsing void,
    but the soft, spacious…Read More

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    Crimsin wrote a new post

    me and Him

    infinite dark beheld mewhile humming a tune he sung over mehappily creating a new fascinationsomeday I would be a companionutterly charmed by himhe sang of grace and commitmentgrowing me from nothing but dustenveloped in His womb I grewfrom nothing...

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    • Some people grow with an appreciation for their maker, and others drift through life. Good one, and a lovely photo. 🙂

      • hello dearest Tim good morning I grew in appreciation when I started to hear him myself not when people at the church told me what he was saying and I never found him I found while contemplating on nature thank you so much for the lovely comment ❤️

    • The becoming is a beautiful thing, Brenda. This one made me smile 😊🧡

    • hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️

    • I love how this whole piece is written. From beginning to being continued!
      As people I feel we continue to evolve.
      Even when we aren’t looking.
      Awesome write!

      • hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously I believe it too we are in a constant state of evoluion and growth no matter how many lives we have you can witness it in old souls and those you can tell are here for the first time…I deeply appreciate you sharing ❤️

    • Dear B,

      For me, the presence of one’s higher power guiding us when we’re willing to receive is pulsating throughout this write. I kept thinking throughout my life whenever I wanted to do something differently but was spiritually guided in a different direction…typically I was grateful it didn’t happen the way I wished. Your piece of growth and gratitude is ever present in this write and your accompanying picture is beautiful. H xx 🌷

      • hello beautiful Honoria good afternoon I’m very grateful to be led and know I”m not alone I didn’t always know that and it was scary… I’m happy you have felt that guiding spirit as well thank you graciously for the love have a beautiful day ❤️

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    Styxian wrote a new post

    Savior/Martyr

    Savior(As told by Mary Magdalene)He was seen as more by some, less by others.As a savior, or a rebel.He lived his life through his heart,being the sinew, trying to hold the world together.And I ached for him, being his...

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    • Your writing is always very deep and this is no exception. Your details of the connection between them is profound indeed and based in love and a memory of him that will never be lost or corrupted. Any comment I can give on this is not enough. There’s so much said here. Great writing, Styx.

      • Thank you Tim. It was a lot of work, including jotting down little notes while working at my job thursday and friday. I do maintenance at an older apartment complex, very busy most of the time. But, the creative ideas wait for no work. LOL.
        I know that this write, because of the title, the header picture, etc, will keep many people away. But I hope those who do read it get something positive from it. There are several gospels not in the bible, some called the gnostics, that tell much different stories from the traditional ones picked to be in the King James version. The version of Mary M being His wife is in some of them. So, who really knows by now.
        And, I am beating myself up over a part three! Do I, do I not. Grrrr.
        I sincerely appreciate your generous comment, Tim. And what you did say is enough. It is awesome.

    • How to start with this. This is excellent!
      Your interpretation of how she adored and suffered his life and loss is truly amazing. A weaving journey through her thought process. How the world can exhaust even the strongest of spiritual character but away from prying eyes, he remembers the blessings of also being human.

      These are gems baby! Honestly:)
      Needs to be put in your book!

      • You knew how much these two writes were beating me up. Lots of editing and hacking, even a few minutes ago. I had a very specific vision of what I wanted it to say. I think I succeeded, after all the edits of course.
        And, the part three…. I dunno. I’m going to chill on it awhile.
        I am so fortunate to have you in my creative journeys. Because you do the same things and can relate to it all.
        I love you immensely!

    • And I, sir, appreciate your steady support of my efforts here. I try my best to make them matter. So thank you.

    • So, when I finished reading this, I took a deep breath and said, “Jesus!”. And then I laughed to myself, because I was only saying it as an exclamation about your writing and not as a statement of the subject… LOL.

      Anyway, this is just beautiful. Not much more I can say. Thank you for sharing it.
      ❤️k

      • LOL !! I purposely avoided using his name in any form. Because it is about Mary’s feelings in dealing with it all. The very human aspect of someone dealing with such a weight added to a relationship. Like dating someone famous, etc., then losing them. Obviously it is on a grander stage. But being human has its basic emotions for all.
        Its so good to see ya! Rock star!

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