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12th nano This came to me thinking of a coworker who told me she is old now because she's 30. I sat there looking at her like she lost her mind. The question is did she feel old?

Wake up to a face

Your face

The current face

Not the face you remember

 

Memory can distort reality

Reality is a bucket of ice water

Even the eyes change

Once showed hope is now resigned

 

Truth is

It is not the face that is disheartening

It is the day

The states you are no longer spring flower but an autumn bloom

 

Both have their time in the sun

Soaking up the attention they garner

Yet the autumn bloom will get a glance

The spring flower will get the gaze

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    1. hello beautiful Fia I’m glad I no longer get gazes I wrote a poem about that I’m waiting to post it…it’s titled invisible…I don’t feel old even though I’m fifty six and the world wants to tell me I’m old…no she is not old just no longer a teen… great write ❤️

    2. This is a great write.
      The reality is we all age. It’s not so bad.
      But realizing that comes with wisdom and learning to embrace the life you’ve lived and where you are mentally.
      I’m happy at 51. You couldn’t pay me to be in my thirties.
      Hell no. Hahaha

    3. You have touched upon a very important topic with your beautiful and meaningful poem, dear Fià. Unfortunately, our Western society is obsessed with a cult of youth. In other cultures, by contrast, older people are more likely to be associated with wisdom and life experience. Fortunately, the ‘army’ of women who are not buying into this youth cult based on outward appearances is growing larger and larger. We only age in years, but we mature in terms of our life experience and our wisdom; our faces reflect the beauty of a life well-lived.
      ​Here’s to us older women!

    4. My sister casually announces she’s fat from time to time and she’s smaller than me. Throws the brain when someone declares themselves to be in a deficit but they still have more than you. I find it funny that I’m actually more content with my aging than I was in my youth. Guess it’s what we take from the life we live. Good write, Fia

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