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Read Morefarewell deepunderground a band of sacred misfits tightly boundWith magic, we did cast Fate threw us to the windsAnd we wander the abyssThe Mistress of Shadowssaid a spell created a shelter for us to dwell conjuring us from the worldWe gathered...
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We’ll be okay, Brenda, so long as we’re all together. ❤️
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thank you lovely one I know we will I believe it too 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. I agree with, Willow. At least we’re all here together. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian I know and believe we will too 💕
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Beautiful. Camelot fell but the legend endures. So too, DUP🌼
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thank you dearest Joe beautifully said 💕
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Brenda, as DUP disappears over the horizon we can make our home here. Your poem is filled with deep emotion for what is lost and what once was.
John
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thank you dearest John I deeply appreciate your presence 💕
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DUP certainly did feel like a sanctuary for the soul. Missing it already. Very nice write, Brenda.
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I will miss her 💕
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Read Morelove lust hate fight views news extra, extra blab all about it smirk laugh moment passed fallen creatures that thrives on hate attacking me when they see their inner ugly perfect am I? not by a long shot maybe more like… imperfectly spiritual finding my inner strength so sad if you been mistreated who was it that made...
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Also so dig the unique format, which works so well in this piece. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. I very much appreciate the read.
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Audible gulp on the last line…
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I heard that gulp in so many whispers.
Lovely…
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Passionately penned, Naaj. You bringing it in this spill, fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Always appreciate your feedback, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
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Damn, Naajir! Welcome to my imagination, I think I could keep you in there a little longer..
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Glad I could sneak into your imagination, Pandy
A smile, a wink and a thank you
for your timeNaaj
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Diggin the simplicity of your response, hun.
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Glad it was well received, harriet.
Thx for the support. It’s deeply appreciated…
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Sam Nash replied to the topic Poetry in the forum General chit-chat
I probably wrote my first poem in grade 4 or 5 like Adira… I have no idea why I stopped writing after I finished high school and moved to college in London… yes life.. and some people along the way…
I returned to writing poetry again in the 95 or 96.. I never wrote any stories then a lady came my way and she insisted I write her a short…Read More -
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Read MoreI almost bit her neck,but her puffed, glossy lipsTrapped cigarette smokeI don't smoke—still, I craved a drag.Snow White bit my Adam's apple.The wicked and the weakface in the eyes of a troubled mirror.Heart beating in her mouth,she...
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Powerfully penned, M.E. A nice trilogy of poems my friend. Stellar imagery. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Tremendous work. Powerful and dark.
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Thank you, Thomas! As always “)
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“Snow White bit my Adam’s apple.”
Ridiculously good…Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and for the comment! “)
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Thank you, Aidra! Means alot to me “)
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Now this…wow. Wicked and dark just like I like.
That line: “Snow White bit my adam’s apple” Mmm— so good. 😈 Thank you for sharing! xx
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And not to mention, there’s Medusa :’) sooooo goooood!!!!
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Thank you! This was an old poem. I thought to repost on StarRite. I am glad you had a bite! 😉
Whispering (Yes, I do have a hard on Medusa, me too) lol
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And a delicious bite it was! I’m all for the oldies but goodies 😉 and I figured we shared the love for Medusa, hehe. xx
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Super creative take on these classic characters. I can see this poem being written into some anthology show or film. Nice work M.E
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Thank you, my friend. I have envisioned this “fairy tale” for a while. And I am satisfied with the result. Its going to be quiet a movie of it. Haha
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All I wanted was love,
but I didn’t want to get my hands dirty.Wow, this is a great line for Medusa. Enjoyed this
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Thank you, Fia!
Thats one of my favorite lines me as well. “)
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Thank you Dragon-Fire! I appreciate it. “)
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thank you lovely one as are you 💕