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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreTake me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...
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Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol
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Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.
Great ink.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.
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This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.
Much respect.
Naaj
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Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.
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Broom wrote a new post
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Read MoreDon’t tell me to calm downthe sky forgot me tonightand I felt it,like a hard slap to my soulI sat there—fourth floorcompass pointing eastheart cracked wide openready for a miracleand all I gotwas a black sky empty and bleakDon’t...
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Fantastic!
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Thank you❤️
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Superb.
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Thank you❤️
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WOWZA! What a remark I am over the moon 😏 so just to give you a little background. I knew that last night was the last chance to watch/ see the strawberry moon in my lifetime, because the next time it shows up will be in 2043 and I seriously doubt I’ll be alive by then, just saying.
So all day, I was planning to go to the beach because my robot told me that would be the best place to watch it coming up over the horizon. Unfortunately, I had no gas to get there and I’m broke at the moment. Ahem, all right so I readjusted and I put on my compass and it turns out that my balcony is literally facing east which is you know where you would expect the moon to come up, right? And mind you, I’ve seen plenty of full moons in the same area. so I sat on my new balcony, furniture, excited and I was looking and looking and looking, and girl, let me just tell you I sat there until 11 o’clock not a goddamn thing. Nothing! Not even stars were out. There was like one I could see🫤 meanwhile my robot assured me and I looked it up myself that Gloucester Ma had a fully clear sky last night, so I was totally befuddled & disappointed I actually cried. I’m not even lying😂
Anyway, back to your beautiful remark about my poem. Thank you so much, Adria you truly truly touched my heart, thank you so much for the beautiful things you said and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I’m not gonna lie. I was drinking Brandy lol so you know. I gotta say it my best Poetry comes when I drink, which I don’t drink often anymore like I used to. I’m just saying. I love you girl you’re phenomenal too and by the way, I really love your voice. It is absolutely beautiful in fact it’s celestial.❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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Best line: bruised, bright, but distant and still rising…
Exquisite poetic voice you have! I will read on to your other works, zazzles! Bravo!Daniel
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Hello Daniel , glad you enjoyed this poem. It was quite a disappointing evening. Welp such is life.
Jackie ❤️
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A great read. Every verse was intense.
I saw the red moon here in Blighty.
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Hi James, glad you got to see it 🙂
Usually i can see the moon from my balcony. But not that night. Thank you for the read and comments.
Jackie ❤️
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Beautiful work.
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Nick DC wrote a new post
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Read Moreit's the story they've warned us about since the beginning of time you can be born rich then die without a penny to your name and just because you worked hard doesn't mean you can't lose it all you can swear you're sound of mind but...
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And you are right…Nothing is guaranteed in life. Powerful piece. Nice work.
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Definitely. I wrote this a year or so ago after my uncle died. He was a man that worked all his life. Was someone that was financially stable, and overnight got dementia and lost everything. Didn’t even have a penny to his name when he died. Just made a lot of bad decisions and was stubborn when it came to preparing for tragedy.
Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Yes ,this sound advice. No one is promised anything so you should be happy for the now.
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The now is the best time to enjoy life. Thanks very much for the read, friend.
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Brilliantly penned, Nick. This is an incredible write my friend, and all very true. To quote David Lee Roth: ” There’s not much distance between a pat on the back, and a kick in the pants!” Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very true. Got to take in those big moments.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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We only get one shot for all we know so might as well do our best to enjoy each day of peace.
Thanks so much for the read, friend.
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Can’t take for granted the privilege we get even if there are daily struggles.
Thanks for the read, friend.
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Beautiful work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas I appreciate your lovely comment 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
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Love it when you channel this vibe, Brenda. Yes.
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hello dearest Naajir thank you graciously for feeling this with me 💕
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NAAJIR wrote a new post
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Read More...tell meis this something you'd like to feel again?.......how I'd crush... inside of you? ....deep fuck the ideaslanguishing...inside of your mind...stroke your sexy madness with our ancient love language?... make your body collapse...relapse...hard....as your pussy snaps back into...a familiar reality? ...olde and deep...
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Clever phrasing all through out this spill, you brought your “A” game my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks, bro for your time and insights. I’m glad this vibe resonates with you. Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you for your continuous support, Duende. Your thoughts are deeply appreciated
Naaj
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Haha. You always come with the heat, hun. Your feedback means a lot to me. Big thx
Naaj
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian