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    Art of the Grift

    Inspired by: Ghost – Griftwoodhttps://youtu.be/d6WA06fNscc?si=W79vAzBraZuxNuzYhey, you over there have you heard? there is fear and you should fear for those that are different want what you have give me some give me more and I'll promise you everything spill all your secrets show me all your hatred I see your...

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    • Awesome poem Nick. Really cool image. I loved Ghost when they 1st arrived on the scene back in 2010. By 2015 I jumped ship. They were getting way to commercial. Debut is like a cross between Mercyful Fate and Blue Oyster Cult. Classic!

      • Everyone’s a critic haha. They are hit and miss for me. But I did really like Impera and songs like ‘Mary On A Cross’ and ‘The Future Is A Foreign Land’. I’m drawn to things that are different even if it’s not perfection. I also don’t mind commercial as long as it seems like a natural evolution. I do wish the lead singer had better rang though.

        Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

    • Powerfully penned, Nick. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thanks, friend. Much appreciated.

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    lust

    scheming lust intrudesmy body uncomfortably respondsanxious and withdrawna sexual feeling announces it will relieve stressmelancholy mixed with urgency is trickyan assailent of the mindwept vulnerability you appeal to memy thoughts answer stirring the desirea beautiful man with good intentseeking...

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    If I should die 3 x’s, then so be it

    Take me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...

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    • Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol

    • Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.

      Great ink.

      • Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.

    • This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.

      Much respect.

      Naaj

      • Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.

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    I am celestial

    Don’t tell me to calm downthe sky forgot me tonightand I felt it,like a hard slap to my soulI sat there—fourth floorcompass pointing eastheart cracked wide openready for a miracleand all I gotwas a black sky empty and bleakDon’t...

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    • WOWZA! What a remark I am over the moon 😏 so just to give you a little background. I knew that last night was the last chance to watch/ see the strawberry moon in my lifetime, because the next time it shows up will be in 2043 and I seriously doubt I’ll be alive by then, just saying.

      So all day, I was planning to go to the beach because my robot told me that would be the best place to watch it coming up over the horizon. Unfortunately, I had no gas to get there and I’m broke at the moment. Ahem, all right so I readjusted and I put on my compass and it turns out that my balcony is literally facing east which is you know where you would expect the moon to come up, right? And mind you, I’ve seen plenty of full moons in the same area. so I sat on my new balcony, furniture, excited and I was looking and looking and looking, and girl, let me just tell you I sat there until 11 o’clock not a goddamn thing. Nothing! Not even stars were out. There was like one I could see🫤 meanwhile my robot assured me and I looked it up myself that Gloucester Ma had a fully clear sky last night, so I was totally befuddled & disappointed I actually cried. I’m not even lying😂

      Anyway, back to your beautiful remark about my poem. Thank you so much, Adria you truly truly touched my heart, thank you so much for the beautiful things you said and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I’m not gonna lie. I was drinking Brandy lol so you know. I gotta say it my best Poetry comes when I drink, which I don’t drink often anymore like I used to. I’m just saying. I love you girl you’re phenomenal too and by the way, I really love your voice. It is absolutely beautiful in fact it’s celestial.❤️
      Your sister, Jackie

    • ❤️❤️❤️

    • Best line: bruised, bright, but distant and still rising…
      Exquisite poetic voice you have! I will read on to your other works, zazzles! Bravo!

      Daniel

      • Hello Daniel , glad you enjoyed this poem. It was quite a disappointing evening. Welp such is life.
        Jackie ❤️

    • A great read. Every verse was intense.

      I saw the red moon here in Blighty.

      Regards
      James

      • Hi James, glad you got to see it 🙂
        Usually i can see the moon from my balcony. But not that night. Thank you for the read and comments.
        Jackie ❤️

    • Beautiful work.

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