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Read MoreRopity RasidyHopalong CassidyBad guys would faint if heReached to his hip! They grew maniacally,HypochondriacallyIll, 'cause he fought with aBlack leather whip!
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Got it, And Thanks, Sam.
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I got it, Sam, but this is my third try to confirm it.
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Yeah, I figured it out, Richard. My computer and I are having a fight right now over who/what/which of us can be more stupid. I think I’m winning — though, if Elvis (my computer) doesn’t buck up, I may have to set it on fire.
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confirmed
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Hopefully it works this time (I’ve changed my anti-virus app. Yest I see your comment!
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Yes, I got it. But I am still having problems leaving reviews and messages. I hope you receive this.
Thank you.
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Read MoreIn a bar's outdoor beer garden,patrons mingle, talk politics,and eat sausagewhile downing beerbeneath an old oak's shade. Among them standsa sultry young woman,accustomed to turning headswherever she goes. Beside her mother,she surveys the crowd,catching the familiar glancesof men who notice her. Then,...
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Haha this is a good one and I like how you end it with the old saying.
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I’m glad you liked it, Fia. Thanks. 🙂
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dearest Tim I hate women like that money grubbers trading their looks for cash prostitutes great write ❤️
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Thanks very much for the comment, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Another excellent write that speaks some truth my friend. Some marriages are more like business arrangements these days. Cold and transactional it would seem. Just my two cents brother. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for your thoughts, Damian. Always a pleasure to see you on my page.
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Tim you paint the scene and the sultry women with masterful brush strokes of description. This took me right into the scene so that I could see everything and the storytelling here is excellent. A really great poem that puts me right there and the slice of life here is tantalizing. Our former local coroner married a young lady who had a tryst with the pool boy and the coroner left his wife. As a woman told me he should have known at his age why she married him in the first place for his money. Loved this so much.
John
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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Kind words don’t hurt anybody
Nasty words hurt the most
Save that jar of coins for a rainy day
Because you never know when you will be short of money
I no longer talk about dying
Because there is more to life than I know
The snowstorm is coming
Dress warm if you are going out
Soon the streets will be covered with snow
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Go your own way Fia
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Thank you, Peter;))
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This portrays power and the ability to choose on her own terms. A devilish poem, Fia, 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write as always my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;)
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this is interesting… love the rhythm of it
im also checking to see if you are receiving this comment… please confirm