You come up with fantastic imagery

You nailed it.

Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!

LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?

I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.

I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.

Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.

Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕

Tremendous work.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.

Damian

I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)

Poweful work and great rhyme. Excellent.

Thanks, girl! I like to make my own entertainment when the lights go down!

I love this story.

This is sensual beauty of the highest order, my friend. You take the scene and fly with it into the heavens. Love especially how you wrote of the respect he gives his sub, not hostile or arrogant but rather a piousness. Loved that ending. You write the scene with the delicately poetic brushstrokes of a true poet priestess.

John