OMG…. This is one of your very very best

Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.

Clay

Nicely done Fia…

Powerful excursion…

<#3 Cipher

Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.

Damian

A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.

This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow

This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.

Wonderful ink.

Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Wonderful storytelling, it kinda reminds me of a sitcom my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

I enjoyed this. Comparing the kiss to drinking water is imaginative–I like it. I need to “see” the action in a story, and that was easy with this. Probably because I’m a very foolish (and hopeless) romantic, I feel bad when romance has to take a back seat to life goals. Maybe she’ll see him again?

I just love how this unfolds. The character development of the Scottish man is truly outstanding. And your grasp of the Scottish lingo is truly amazing. I love how you made the Scottish words so clearly understandable yet authentic. And the story telling is fabulous.

John