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Read MoreJERK OFF GIRLEvery city has it's secret spots...to find some sexual relief.It moves around as wordget's around. I know.A girl HAS to make a living.Don't assume it's all aboutpoor little Paula - it's not.Been there...done only some of it.I...
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DAMN! You’ve seen it all. Your description and detail is razor sharp. Explicit, and some readers may have a hard time with this material. But goddamn it’s to the point and marvelously executed.
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Read MoreThe Grim ReaperThe old woman was taking a walk through the forest, like she did every day before breakfast. She enjoyed the fresh morning air and the silence. There was hardly anyone outside at this early hour. To her...
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Hello Elke. Outstanding story. A stellar piece of writing that captures so much detail and intrigue. A perfect piece for this time of year. Well done my friend. xo
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Thank you so much for reading and your kind comment, dear Keith! Your comments always tear my heart wide open with gratitude and awe!
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Quite the riveting tale, Sappho! It was very clever of you to switch up the common portrayals of death and love. I enjoyed all the natural references and surprises you sprinkled throughout this piece. Excellent write, my friend.
Clay
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Your kind comment and your appreciation makes me blush, dear Clay! Thank you very much!
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Read MoreLove Sonnet XLVIII Yaara, I must ask, what are your intentions, your promises? Will you give my heart peace, or will you bring me rain? Will you find me in these shadows, in the dark places where I roam? It is here I...
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Neruda would’ve invited you over for a beer on the veranda, and talk words with you. What an afternoon that woulda been, huh. You’d fit right in.
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Read MoreLove Sonnet LXVI When I was younger, life seemed easier, filled with sun light adventures of us holding hands while walking through a forest of Aspen and green. But, as I grew older, a Winter wind blew in my face, no mater which way I turned. Then I...
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You just nailed the seasons here Curt .. well you did, all bar Summer .. Now I’m betting you are going to have one hell of a time between the coming of Spring & Autumn .. Write on brother .. Neville
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Well Neville, I met her in Autumn, married her in Winter, and we divorced in Spring…. I guess Summer was the time of contentment!? Thanks Neville, I appreciate your comment.
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My absolute pleasure sir .. N 😎👍
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Love love this one… it’s one of those that flows sweetly from the heart into ours, just how love should flows. “welcome the chaos of your smile” how gorgeous this line is… expressing the bittersweet mess love can make us feel, it will stick in my head along other lines too, oh perfect poetry of love ✨💖💕 I like the song too, it fits the emotional ambiance. Thank You🤍
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Hi Light. Can’t go wrong with the Moody Blues. Their music is poetry. That line came to me as I was thinking about the woman who became my true love. She left me for another, for a more “normal” life, but I still think about her.
Thanks Light, I appreciate your comments and visits muchly.
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Hi and Good Evening ✨
Sorry to hear about that, but let’s us say even sadness can be an inspiration and birth good poetry 😊
Wishing You Happy Days 🎈
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Thank you, and yes, absolutely.
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Ms. Mary, within a smile, worlds collide, kaleidoscopes swirl colors, and hearts beat faster into a blush. In other words, CHAOS!!! Who knows what would, or could have happened had those letters been sent, or words spoken? Perhaps a wonderful chaos?
Thank you, Mary. I always look forward to your visits and words.
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Hi, Redzone! I welcome you to “BACK TO POETRY BASICS” and would like to invite you to join-in on our Sonnet lesson (below). It’s easy: just read and follow along. I look forward to sharing with you. ⁓ Richard🖌
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Hi Richard,
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oops didn’t mean to send that too short of a reply. I read your paper? instructions about the nature of and what constitutes a formally written English Sonnet. I am afraid I have only ever attempted one. If I can find it I will post in the “Back To Poetry Basics” group. This group was mented to me by Valuptas Whispers Unholy. and then I saw Fia’s…Read More
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C’mon, Curt, join-in. There’s nothing like taking advantage of an opportunity when it present itself, and it’s FREE! With your creative talents, it would be most thrilling to read your version of a proper Sonnet, and then you’ll know how from then on. : )
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Sounds like a rough world in which to live. The writing lives on and on…