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Read MoreOur world as we know ittwisted brick by brickA world so twisted we kill our healthy and heal our sick Against our mother, pro all nature we bleed with vile religious crazeAll for war-induced pharmaciesin a 2 feet blinding maze This...
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Thank you for reading and listening! 🙏
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Epically penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics with a powerful message and being a rock/metal guy I love the arrangement. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian!
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I’m truly blown away by this.
I’m reading it as I’m listening to the audio clip.
This is a talented piece of art.
So articulate in its own way. I love it! x
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Thank you so much for your kind words Rosie! It really means a lot 🙏🏻
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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I found most of them cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s great.;))
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cool idea!
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Thank you 😊 🩷
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Interesting
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Thank you ;))
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Damian was the one that stood out right away. Interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen a puzzle as a poem before.
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Thank you. I just wanted to have some fun with finding the writers in a puzzle.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I wanted to post two versions of the same song to show, even if the music changes it is still a powerful write
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We had to change our original comment in recognition of your ability to say bodies slapping in an acceptable way. Hahaha, on the for real Lady we love it, it makes us think of slow love. Tight
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Haha you have me dying here, Thank you Me
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Laughter is positive energy Lady, enjoy every bit that comes your way
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This drifts between tenderness and urgent intensity, capturing the physical and emotional in a way that’s intimate without being flashy. I love how the language makes the body feel like both terrain and vessel, with every moment earned and alive.
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Thank you so much. Its not easy to write subtitles and take a person on a journey. Its a skill. Lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write, you always deliver the goods my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, cuz, I want to write more of these but being upfront with what you want is perfect too
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Chère F.,
You are being rather harsh on yourself, labelling this as 17. Or you are living in a different part of the world.This kind of love making I learned/learnt from another beautiful lady.
I can only hope that I can get you to rub off on me the way to describe it the way you do.
This is almost French by nature. You can get away with most everything, as long as you mind your language.Needless to say I love it to bits!
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Thank you, I called it We Delve not 17. lol Thank you for appreciating the subtlety of the poem.(almost French huh;))
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hello beautiful Fia so deeoly passionate I have felt this in my lifetime ❤️sexy and powerful write…
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Thank you, so much crimsin.
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As always we read the piece first, then wondered what it would sound like. You never disappoint Lady, this is tight, that first stanza screams