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Read MoreThere he was… Laying on the cool grass looking up at the sky Longing to be in her sweet arms once again Wishing he could hold her close just one more time Dreaming of a moment that would never end He rests on the...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend, grabbed me by the heartstrings a bit. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. I’ve always liked writing pieces that have plot twists or bigger reveals at the end. I often think of those who are passing and what their last thoughts may be.
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Wow this a touching piece. The memory of him building the house for her as he is passing away is sweet and sad
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Thank you Fia. I was trying to have this piece read more as a Civil War piece but felt that it’s obscurity in time could be left open to interpretation and connection to the reader.
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend, incredible flow throughout especially that first stanza. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Underrated word, ‘connive’. Very expressive. Like a baleful but seductive energy straight from the Abyss….
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This is not a poem. This is a black magic charming spell. 😀
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Reflection often offers more now as an older man than I was younger and naive.
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Very nice description and the mad hatter ending made me smile.