The cinderella comparison had me saying aww even though I was smiling while reading this piece

A lovely write. Well written with some great rhymes!

Very good. I just read that Musk said that death is faulty design and in the future we will figure out how to fix it.

Thanks Fia.
Don’t normally agree with Elon but he is right that death will be eventually defeated by science but probably only for the rich.
You wouldn’t want the poor living forever now ..would you.
Seriously,who really wants to live forever..not me.
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author

Betty love your writes. Wooo

Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight

What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!

“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
Good to see you donating to the site. It’s about time!

Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
You are a premium writer, Betty. Any site goes up in value with you posting in it. It isn’t always about the subject matter. It’s the technique and ability of the writer that carries the weight. You are gold.

Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
Nice work Betty.

LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!

The Basic Law states that human dignity in inviolable. But dignity, physical and mental health have long since become the playball of abuse of power and corruption. Very well expressed. Powerful writing dear Damian!

I hate corruption. Seems that it’s becoming more obvious with no one taking charge. Awesome piece dude!

When reality warps, the shapeshifters ascend as keepers of the shifting veil.
Only those who guard the ancient flame of truth withstand the empire of forgetting.
Great words Damian.

A terrific summary of mankind’s terrifying – and worsening – predicament. Excellent Damian. Harriet-Jacqui xx

Damian this poem brings light to everything that is going on. Really good cuz.

This reads like a warning flare shot straight into the dark.
The anger is focused, and the clarity makes it hit harder.

I literally sat on my hands for a minute so I didn’t launch into immediate rant. The whole purpose of their actions is multifold, I think. First and foremost, create fear and stir up animosity and hatred. Second, fill their privately owned concentration camps for free labor. And third, though definitely not least, continue the trafficking started by the big name these days. These people need to be stopped, prosecuted and locked away forever. Powerful, my friend