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Read MoreThe sputtering smoke of her lamp, throwing quivering shadows on the the cold stone walls of her tomb. But she cannot escape death. And she cannot embrace the life she once possessed in daylight. So, her Gothic heart thunders on, the crimson lamplight of her soullessness, merely...
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The atmospheric density and the haunting dark imagery catch the readers attention with the first words. Your gothic queen is a wonderfully terrifying beauty who makes me want to read more. Brilliant work, Daniel!
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Doing a complete rewrite. As I have realized the potential for this story…
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What imagery. You have the magic of the pen
Daniel. I was completely pulled in from the first line. Thanks for sharing
Jackie 👍🏻
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Powerfully penned, SW. Sometimes less is more, outstanding write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Terrific write….short and powerful.
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Beautiful ink! Thank you for sharing.
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Read MoreThe moment the holy water sizzled on my flesh, I knewthat I was destined for flames. The priest saw it, frownedand no longer called me, "son."He walked on by, never to bless me again. The moment I died, I ascended.Below me...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daniel I fear I will be judged for my delusions I think I will go to hell this is uplifting way to look at things 💕
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I believe I’m going to hell too. We can’t decide when, but we can decide how we meet that end. Love this life the fullest and to any good God that should count for something. I’ll stay strong if you stay strong, Brenda.
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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thank you Daniel hugs 💕
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Superb write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian