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Brenda, my writing is getting more sorrowful, I feel. Darker, not depressingly, but hauntingly beautiful. You know me by now, I ramble in comments, haha. Nearly four months off my medication now. My writing has evolved somehow recently, I can’t explain it. Thanks Brenda.
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![Profile picture of Alexandria]()
Sometimes we express ourselves with a cloak of darkness, but there’s usually a deep feeling heart behind it.
Thank you for sharing a small part of your world.🌹
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Daniel. Your writes have layers and depth my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYou enter my pride, tearing me free of my egostripping me bareNude feelings trembleunder your stoic gaze lets peel it back slowlike there’s somethin worthy underneatheven tho we know there’s nothinbut skin scars and warnin signs Your eyes penetrate, burning my...
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Very intense write. Both meshed well in this piece 💓
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously from us both woman for such a lovely comment 💕
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Powerful work.
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thank you graciously from us both dearest Thomas 💕
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hello lovely Raven thank you for the love on this write 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda & Ambjr. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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Read MoreShe danced alone in the streets.Oblivious to 'their' stares.'They' said she was mad.But 'they' just couldn't hear the music.
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this is beautiful dearest Benny 💕
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Thank you for reading.
Find the song by Sting called They Dance Alone.
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Even if they could hear it, some of them would still say it. Imaginations in full stagnation. This is lovely. Really builds the visual beautifully
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Thanks and I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙏
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I am madly enthralled and peaked by this loveliness. The depth is Everything. Umph.
Gentle man, thank you for whispering this one upon us❤️
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Sometimes, if I’m lucky,the words come out and please others.
I’m glad you enjoyed my words.😘
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Read MoreEverything’s going up in smoke tonight Temperature is rising from the fire below Speaking in curses to mask such delight While momentum has started to plateau Positive thinking can only lead one so far Losing ground to a pack of assorted lies On the face...
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damn good write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I know this was written in time passed, but I believe you’re saying you move to the beat of a different drum. I feel you, because so do I.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on, I knew I had company. You’re very welcome, and thank you for commenting. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how things are pulled from Damian’s vault. This is good.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I thought all writers have a vault? Don’t tell me I missed another meeting. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one took me somewhere…the smell of sulfur & the rising burn of hell beneath the feet. All I can say is, they spread their propaganda but nothing’s stopping us from spreading truth. Who knows what could happen when enough voices shout it? Your vault must be a gold mine, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Keen observation skills and a great sense of smell, you possess there. There is nothing stopping us from spreading the truth, it’s all I strive to do. My writing is so steeped in exposing the truth, even as a young writer, once I found my calling I knew it. So you can count me in. The vault has some good stuff in there, it also is the resting place for some not so good writes. In all honesty, I’m a hoarder I don’t even through my worst stuff away. Some have been known to be retooled and rereleased, others can’t be saved, but they tell my journey as a writer. I am also sentimental. I still have my first notebook of work, from when I was 15 years old. And it was terrible. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You nailed it. Good writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The gospel truth.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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hello dearest Daniel I feel you on this one great write 💕