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Wally wrote a new post
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Read MoreI have an obsession with buying more time So I watch the seconds hand sweep by The open heart shows the mechanism inside But then her frail hand covers mine And time suddenly seems to slow down I kiss her forehead She smiles at me I...
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Thank you Peter. I appreciate your comment.
This was for my grandmother who spent last week in the hospital. She’s back home now, but the time we spent with her gave me more reflection.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. What a lovely write and tribute to her, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian.
She’s doing better now. It’s just that in those delicate times we learn to appreciate those relationships even more.
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Thank you so much Adira.
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Very sweet. As it should be…but eludes most of us.
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Thank you very much Paula. We just have to be ready to capture those moments.
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Anxiety is such a beast. Like the snake trying to swallow its own tail. Very solid piece here
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Our minds can take us on a wild ride and it’s out decision to do so. The unknown will often intrude and fall on us like rain. It’s the not knowing of something and fearing the outcome that gets us.
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Thanks for the comment Tim
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Oothat SOB can be a soul snatcher!.
I know and feel you deeply, sigh. ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Felt this one my friend, sorrow moans through these words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for feeling the emotion behind these words without feeling they would be empty I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read MoreThis ocean breathes… Your rhythm of the sea! Waves rising and falling like our chests do when we breathe. You are lost somewhere deep… Deep within my heart… You're the one who tickles my heartstrings. And from within you sing your rhythm of the sea.
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hello dearest Daniel good evening this is beautiful I love the ocean 💕the ebb and tide so much like love…
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Beautifully penned, Can almost feel the waves in the flow my friend. Amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brenda, this is breathtakingly beautiful 🧡
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hello Willow thank you graciously this is for a friend who was in my day to day just pure magic I don’t get to see her everyday now but I wanted her to know how much I missed her…she is kind of a gypsy though we stay in touch on FB… I’m happy you liked this 💕
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This melodic music and words are beautiful
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hello lovely Fia I hope you’re having a great afternoon thank you graciously this lady is now of a kind…you are too I can tell beautiful 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you deeply 💕
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hello dearest Steven thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment and for seeing my poetry though dark part of the heavenly realms it’s deeply appreciated 💕💕
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Just lovely, both the writing and the love you have for your mother.🙏🙏