This is passionate. Like this Crimsin

Passionately penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. I concur with Fia. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is very insightful and I remember asking for the phone and my mother giving me this look. “Wait” it said. Nice

This is really good and there is nothing wrong with living on the edge.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like those two stanzas a lot as well. Always thankful for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian

Dear D,

This piece brings in memories of writing letters, buying actual record albums, listening to the radio on an actual radio. I greatly appreciated the thought process in this write and the subtle warning to be aware of things lurking about. Terrific write. H🌷

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Just trying something different. Appreciate you.

Damian

Dreams are casting doubt once again
It sometimes seems it’s so deliberate
Like a stiff jab landing across the chin

Fantastic, absolutely fantastic.

I walked through this one like the aisles of record stores, and frantically scribbling in my spiral bound notebooks, and trying to survive in a world full of so much that sorting it out became impossible…so we just chose live in the music and the words. The conversations that felt monumental then…come back today and feel even more incredibly relevant. But we hadn’t thought of them in years. Like the binding of time through word and thought. So hard to feel those moments in a time like now, when everything is fake news and nothing can be trusted. You took me on a journey here, my friend

Great vibe on this one, nostalgic but also fond of warm memories.
Nicely penned.

Crimsin I enjoyed this piece and the picture is amazing.

thank you graciously dearest Styxian I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️

This is very beautiful. I want to read this constantly now. Thank you 🙂

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write with a spiritual vibe my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

“The onyx kingdom welcomes me” is lovely and profound. You have laced your words into a contemplative journey throughout this piece. Very nice.