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Beautiful work.
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Thank you Fia and Thomas for reading.
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Some people sit back and enjoy the scenery
Others want to memorize it and spread the word.
Thanks for sharing!
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreI Indiana Jones'd my depressionWith fake smiles and aggressionNo spores of joy in sight to teach me counter lessonsSporadic sessions of anxiety suppressionAnother forced excursion to divert the world from questioningIn actualityThis evil king is suppressing meBut in a...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This had me moving. The riff is good, and the music went well with it.
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Always a pleasure to read your opinion Fia! Thank you so much!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Your arrangements always fit your words tightly. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the kind words Damian!
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Oh Lordy! You’ve done it again.
It’s like you know what melody/hook to use depending on the tone of the lyrics.
Where to emphasize your message. I listened to this when you posted but didn’t know how to reply.
I was at a loss of words! That is rare! Hahaha
Much respect chica!
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Thank you Adelphina! It’s a lot of trial and error but I warms my heart to hear people appreciate it. I’ll keep at it and hope to keep improving along the way. Have a wonderful day!
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Thank you! ❤️
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You’re a beast at this thing Lady, to freaking Tight
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Thank you! More coming in a few days (hopefully)
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This i awesome. I somehow talked Fia into getting a Spoken Word group going (actually, I kind of bamboozled her into it). HER wants to join and she suggested we get Willow and you as well. After listening to this, I feel really out of my league. I’m a lifelong entertainer, but mostly in theater. When I started writing for performance, I had no music, just me, so that’s what I’ve been doing. But you would bring some real class to the group, and if we do this right, we can build something outstanding for all of us. Interested?
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Hey, what happened to the audio? I sent a link to this page to a friend and he told me no song was here, so I came back — and it’s gone! Please put it back.
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Apparently because of an update on the site, all audio on all posts got removed sadly. I hope I have time tomorrow to upload the audio again on all my songs.
In the meantime you can listen to the songs on my YouTube channel if you’d like: youtube.com/@Drieks
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That I would like. So tell me, would you like to join the Spoken Word Group? You would be a very welcome member, and I think we can all benefit from each other.
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Read MoreUpon an endless paper plain,the sword leans—half blade, half quill.Black ink falls like dark tears,gravity grieves in its remembrance. Each drop forms a kanji—unwritten yet complete;the keen edge hums calligraphic,penned silence within this violence. Strike and poem share one stroke—both wound...
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Fantastic. Oh! I love the blade.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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孤独なトンボ Kodokuna tonbo ≽༏≼
(Lonely Dragonfly)The mind is touched, sad emotions softly whispered unto, your diction, Dear Poetess, lends a tale of long ago … yet, ever-present in the Samurai heart’s core ‘n eternal soul ~ his katana.
And, ohhh, you’ve sang it’s poignant timbre as a true Onna-Bugeisha, who always spoke her power equally by virtue of ebony kanji or blooded tanto.The rhythm ‘n flow of your Free Verse Quatrains dance above the page, as though transporting us into those feudal moments of yore … the magick hallmark of a master poetess’ pen.
I strived to highlight a word, a line, a verse for you … alas, all conspired to create the whole of exact poetical symmetry – your artwork choice in sheer perfection.
I gratefully bow 🥋 … thank you, Dear S. Libellule ⁓ Richard ⛩️
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The soul of a samurai rendered into a pome of compelling wonder. You have the spirit of Japan written with the Zen of a poet who can translate a culture and a place and its people into poetry that resounds like koto music in the night.
John
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Nicely done… smooth… soothing… great flow…
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