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Read MoreI listened to a poem earlier todayHow we are always battered and left for another guy to take because we went astray But what about the generational curses that we were taught that men aren't shit, and they weren't here to be fought they're...
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Thank you so much Vision;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Your voice was authentic, focused, and real.. A very moving piece. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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I imagine this was somewhat cathartic once you got it off your chest and out in the open .. You have a fine pen and a lovely voice by the way .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you and appreciate it Neville;))
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Pow! Truth!
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Thanks Jim;))
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Wow. Powerful work.
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Thank you,Thomas 😊
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Thank you for saying that, John😊
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Fia, this is one of the best poems defining the realities of love gone wrong that I have read. Your introspection here is precisely articulate, emotionally honest to a tee, and powerful. This really spoke to me as a man. You really told it like it is with the sincerity of a genuine woman who has been through the wringer. Poetry that does more than engage the reader it made me think and feel deeply. And the spontaneity here is fabulous. Thank you so much for sharing this testament.
John
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Read MoreThe town is shrouded In velvety gloomWisps of fog rise to the mountain heights A flash of lightning flickers in the nightOdin's thunderous roar proclaims doom The streets are deserted, dogs barkYour windows are closed, the doors lockedYou think you're...
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Oh my!
I’ll not be knock on your door next Halloween.
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Don’t worry, in reality I handed out candy last night. But who knows which beast slumbers deep inside me! 😂 thank you for reading and commenting, my friend!
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Any Reese’s peanut butter cups?
mmm what beast indeed. 😉
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This is a wicked write Elke. The detail and marvelous imagery you create is executed wonderfully. Hope your Halloween was filled with magic, scares and happiness.
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I’m really no big fan of horror movies and stories but I couldn’t resist trying my hand at this genre. You are my role model! Thank you very much for reading and writing your kínd comment, dear Keith!
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I hear the knocking, but it can’t come in.
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Come in, dear Adagio, there are some sweets left over. If you dare… 🤣
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
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Shreek, eeeke, eat my little furies!! BOOO!
Men, far too many, and their deranged minds, know no end when it comes to torturing women.
Happy Halloween….er….DO NOT ENTER, BEWARE!!
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting, my friend!
How I wished these slaughters in the name of God had used their creativity on more meaningful and helpful projects than on satisfying their misogyny and there lust for power!
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Wickedly penned, Elke. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much for reading and writing this kind and appreciative comment, dear Damian!
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Read Moresadden refrain I've done it againacting more like a goat then a sheepit's not my fault I get confused at the true nature of Godone point of contention is why were these secrets of heaven so damningthe fallen angels...
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I fall for your poetry every time Brenda. Love the wording and atmosphere. Great image too. xox
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good morning dearest Keith thank you for the love on this I wish I had answers definitive ones ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian have a great night ❤️
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Read MoreI trap memories in versescribbling in my sleepetching them so deeply...they become permanent marksfading slowly over time...leaving beautiful scars it's a medication...needed to survive{pre}scribed for internal healingit comes with no deadening propertiesno sedatives...but it's my personal narcotic I won't deny the...
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I second this addiction. I feel lost and unfocused if I do not write.
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Buncha word junkies up in here…as it should be
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I third this addiction.
I love the written word..mine and others.
Great write,right,rite,wright….lol
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Love the word play there! Thank you, Peter
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Very relatable Willow. Thank you for sharing 💕
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I figured I’d be preaching to the choir here. Thank you, Drieks 😊
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Infectious vibe your words and the musical arrangement my friend. It’s the one addiction that I feed and I refuse to kick. You summed it up well as you always do. Loved this one Willow. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I think this addiction is more healing than harming. It’s how we clear headspace and reset. About whatever is naggin’ the noggin. I knew you would feel this one too. Thank you, my friend
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You express perfectly what most of us here feel, dear Willow! It’s the same with me – I scream, weep, bleed and laugh my soul onto the paper.
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We are a special breed. I’m just glad we have a little safety bubble here. Thank you, Elke
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It’s horrific, that ‘silent scream’, the self-reflection not seen in the mirror, the expression held inside. I hear your pen, Willow. It’s LOUD!!! But I welcome it. Let the ink flow, make Rorschach’s of rage across the page. Just know, you are seen!
Curt
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As long as I’m “screaming,” no need to worry. If I suddenly stop…check for a pulse. Thank you, Curt
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Brilliant work.
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I don’t run the pen. It runs me, girl. As Shrek said…Better out than in. Excise the wounds so they can heal clean. Thank you, girl. You wield a mighty pen yourself
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Thank you, Thomas
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Marvelous piece of writing Fia. Powerful, unapologetic and demanding. This is a well thought out piece. Nice work.