Bloody brilliant….⭐⭐⭐⭐🙏

I’ve always envied this form of writing cuz my jagged mind refuses to follow suit.
Man oh man this is so fantastic…especially the subject matter
Deep…dark.. just the alley I’d venture down

Much respect

Naaj

Yes, nicely, craftily written..

Mic Drop!

Thank you all for the kind comments.

Brilliantly penned, Reggie. This was a great write my friend, and they always know. Appreciate you.

Damian

What a great poem! I love the uncertainty throughout the piece…to be rewarded in the end!

I agree with everything Adira said, this was wonderful and so so pleasant.
I love this, well done.

xx
~P.G💋

Thank you folks, for your kind comments.

I’m never away. You can find me underneath your bed. Waiting patiently. Sweet poem Meg.

This is beautiful and I can see why you could want endless sleep.

All of a sudden I can’t open my eyes anymore… yup definitely a witch 🧙

Excellent write..thank you for sharing

I’m going to go have a little nap now….not post coital but a nap nonetheless.💋

I couldn’t leave you out… succubus.

Gee, Lady-Poet 🥀🐝

With such eloquent skill you’re blessed; and, this gorgeous Kyrielle Sonnet, laid in perfect iambic tetrameter and revealing refrains, proves it ~ ohhh-so brilliantly!

What else to say when you’re away,
but that my dreams are all of You.
When every motion’s set a-sway …
warmth undulates me all night through.

“Last night, you came inside my dream.
Though, desert heat would have us keep
our love apart, you poured a stream
and left me wanting endless sleep.” (MM-mmm!)

Herein, Dear Poetess, fraught with vivid imagery, emotive lure, smooth as silk diction, and metaphor to turn the most masterful bard green with envy, you’ve word-painted us a dream to build ‘n hold onto.

Excuse me, please, I feel the fantasy pillow softly calling my name! ⁓ Rascal✨

Longing ‘twined with love and lust was palpable. Plus I totally loved the refrain at the end which tied it together perfectly. Well felt writing, Mistress Kitten!

Beautiful. Dreamy and relatable.

Your sweetness melts me.
Thanks for stroking me girl…
Can you hear me purr?

The way you write always leads me to multiple roads. Once feet start down one, the other appears & makes me pause

Intriguing. Were you the victim of your own pride?
Nice spill

haunting dearest Tim compelling write makes me want to know more ❤️

I like your unique imagery. The final line here is particularly intriguing.

Absolutely stunning in few words.
So raw and felt which opens so many doors of the soul. Lovely man, I feel your ache. ❤️

Powerfully penned, Tim. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian