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    Kissing

    You are handsomeLike a japanese wise cartoonI love walking next to youI love seeing you straight in your almond eyesAs youth evaporates from youI love kissing you in the benchAt the parkFor hours.

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    Movement

    ''if it ain't done with passion then what's the point?''   subsisting at the point of a needle are the conditioned masses waiting for   contact   that something   ^^^extra^^^ terrestrial   or   ~~sub~~ terranean    a Morse coded entropic vibe inducing a soul gathering   e x p e r i e n c e   deconstructed back down universal building blocks   destroying invisible blockades   in waves of  double helix augmentation gifting disambiguation in tsunamis of   Tango Roger Union Tango Hotel   thru...

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    • First, I love the Esthetics of this piece. You really make the reader focus. The first line was on point. I enjoyed this.

    • Movement is EVERYTHING. And you certainly hit your stride in this piece. Too often seem to wanna wait on a “sign” before they’ll get off their asses & do something. If the thought whispers in the mind…move on it. That’s why it’s there.

      • You always come through with very insightful comments, Willow.
        Always appreciative of your support.

    • Truth runs through everything – or should for Life’s sake! The ‘do unto others as..’ in any faith is the truth of existance, without it – all’s lost. Perhaps that explains the reason for our planet gradually fading into space even unreachable via Man’s ability. Maybe Al will win the contest – when it’s truthful enough to say how and – able. Fine writing, also a fine claim to fame by, perhaps, starting a debate

      • ” Maybe Al will win the contest ”

        it will…for a Time

        Great commentary thru and true
        …much appreciation

        Naaj

    • Love the flow and the T.R.U.T.H. in this. Must have missed seeing this one on the board when I was here the last few times. But that’s just like the truth….you have to go looking for it. Magickal as they are, we can’t depend or even subsist on thought & word alone. Actions…passions…are what makes it an earthly reality. It’s like the old truther meme says…”the world is not real yet everything you do matters”

      Keeping this one.

      • Big thx or your insightful response, Benjamin.
        I truly appreciate your energy.

        Much respect

        Naaj

    • Big thx, lady. I always appreciate your depth of insight.
      And I’m also enjoy hearing about your shower escapades 🙂

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    hope

    brooding anxiety, what a painful mixhurt full of uncertainty learned from experiencethings are going to get better I hearthere is no promise of suchunadulterated dawnsmiling freckles at memy pain releasedsunshine lightens my horizons with promisesno matter what, still, I...

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    Critique of Night of the Living Dead

    Critique of Nightof the Living Dead...I hadn't had a tv setin nearly two years.My neighbor was movingout and I saw him in the hallcarrying his TV. "I told himto be careful as he was on thestairs. He laughed and...

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    Sky's on fire

    Don’t look now But the sky’s on fire I didn’t know things burned in shades of pink Peeks of blue in between the lazy flares I thought that was supposed to be The hottest part of the flame Fully formed day clouds Drifting away like the...

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