”if it ain’t done with passion then
what’s the point?”
subsisting at the point of a needle
are the conditioned masses
waiting for
contact
that something
^^^extra^^^
terrestrial
or
~~sub~~
terranean
a Morse coded entropic vibe
inducing a
soul gathering
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x
p
e
r
i
e
n
c
e
deconstructed
back down universal building blocks
destroying
invisible blockades
in waves of
double helix augmentation
gifting disambiguation in tsunamis of
Tango
Roger
Union
Tango
Hotel
thru solar and sonar
the message is authenticated
it’s time for some action
earthquake the bod
shake up the proverbial status quo
move
simply because
life
depends
on
it
First, I love the Esthetics of this piece. You really make the reader focus. The first line was on point. I enjoyed this.
I’m really glad you connected with this vibe, Fia
A little something for the sub-conscious.
Much respect
Naaj
Movement is EVERYTHING. And you certainly hit your stride in this piece. Too often seem to wanna wait on a “sign” before they’ll get off their asses & do something. If the thought whispers in the mind…move on it. That’s why it’s there.
You always come through with very insightful comments, Willow.
Always appreciative of your support.
Truth runs through everything – or should for Life’s sake! The ‘do unto others as..’ in any faith is the truth of existance, without it – all’s lost. Perhaps that explains the reason for our planet gradually fading into space even unreachable via Man’s ability. Maybe Al will win the contest – when it’s truthful enough to say how and – able. Fine writing, also a fine claim to fame by, perhaps, starting a debate
” Maybe Al will win the contest ”
it will…for a Time
Great commentary thru and true
…much appreciation
Naaj
Love the flow and the T.R.U.T.H. in this. Must have missed seeing this one on the board when I was here the last few times. But that’s just like the truth….you have to go looking for it. Magickal as they are, we can’t depend or even subsist on thought & word alone. Actions…passions…are what makes it an earthly reality. It’s like the old truther meme says…”the world is not real yet everything you do matters”
Keeping this one.
Big thx or your insightful response, Benjamin.
I truly appreciate your energy.
Much respect
Naaj
I wasn’t here for this, but no matter. Truth always remains.
There is no point if it’s not done with passion. None. But you have to add honesty.
Passion without honesty only leaves behind emptiness and then you must move because there is nothing left.
Stagnation is the death of the soul and I, as well as too many people, have had enough deaths to last too many lifetimes.
The world only changes when we change ourselves. Your introspective poems are my favorite, Naaj,
no matter how much I tell you I enjoy having to take cold showers after reading your fire.
Carry on, soldier.
Big thx, lady. I always appreciate your depth of insight.
And I’m also enjoy hearing about your shower escapades 🙂
Hahaha. And there’s the truth, lol!