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hello dearest Keith great to see you thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write my friend. I concur with Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreAfter a long conversationWhere we could understand each otherI thought to myselfIt is niceI can connectThen a shade of pleasure passed over my face.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Always dig your observations my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI’m not weak. And to be honest, I’m not strong either.. I’m the perfect balance of both; I’d bet that you are neither. Your weakness of the flesh, with your emotions suppressed, drowning in temptation, but oh sweet baby, I’ve not tempted you yet. I’m resistant to...
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Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!
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Thank you xx
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The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.
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Defiance is one of my strong suits. Thank you, dearest Fia. xx
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Well phrased battle of wills 🌼
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I appreciate it. xx
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Great flow and a very smart human, to tight
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I thank you dear. xx
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Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…💋
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Absolutely Peter, you get it. The price is too high, and I am too cheap. 😉 Thanks for reading. xx
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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you. Wasn’t there a saying about defiant girls? Or does my memory fail me? lol xx
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Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!
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Keith, you are always appreciated my dear friend. Thank you for reading. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dearest Damian, I have to keep things exciting. Thank you for reading, it’s always a pleasure. xx
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Read MoreMy skin hurts. It feels like they're ripping it off my bones—sliver by sliver. I can't scream anymore. My voice left me an hour after they started. They said that once it's done, I'll be a changed person. Yeah,...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.
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Thank you Vision 😊
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Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.
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Read MoreYou wouldn’t think lonelinesscould breathe between our warm bodies,not when we lie naked togetherclose enough to feel each others breath. But it can.And sometimes, it does.I lie beside you,listening for your soft drift into sleep,hoping,almost praying,that your hand will wander,and...
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This is seriously lovely and not only took my breath away but replaced some of the cold of a very cold day with some much needed warmth .. Neville
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Thank you Neville.
Words that make others warm are the best words.🙏
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This is very nice.
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment.🙏
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Heartfelt. Well written Brenda.xox