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hello dearest Styxian thank you graciously I think you’re right about the vibe…I wonder about how many lives I’ve lived with some of the words I come up with it’s a thought ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI’m lost in between the heavy beats of her mystic heart Like an echo reverberating without response Falling into an infinite void of dreamless sleep In a reticent ephemeral reconnaissance But I’m fully immersed in the bliss of this abyss Awake and aware in...
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Wonderfully done, Wally. Your rhyme scheme is clever and precise. And the write flows very well. Plus the message itself is almost serene with it’s approach.
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Thank you Styxian. Lately I found myself writing while more listening to music and different wave of emotion seems to compel these spills.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Always appreciate your visits.
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Read MoreFreedom lost with a muzzle flash Muzzle flash after muzzle flash Kiss them good night With Armoured lips With bullet teeth Endless fall, the bombs of peace
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I like this.
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Thank you. I have been wrestling with this one for a couple of weeks.
Regards
James
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Excellent
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thanks for reading.
regards
james
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Read MoreThe Hidden Watchers always knewthere would come a silence before the shift...a paradigmnot of peace, but of pressure, as if the very air knows the future is inhaling the machines hum like prophets, the earth quakes like memory ...and somewhere between...
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hello dearest Naajir man this is deep but I expect that from you you understand concepts a lot of people don’t even consider…I think for instance our poetry going over the satelites could some day find themselves transmitted through space and touch another civilization ❤️
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I feel you on that, Brenda. It’s all about expansion…. let’s make it happen.
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. This is an excellent write my friend. Dig the layers in your work brother, I often miss the simpler times of an analog world, digital has no soul or warmth. Just my opinion. Much respect always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Analog is where it’s at, bro. I still have my vinyl tho I don’t play anymore.
Still connected to my DJ’s who still rock analog here in NYC. It’s still a major component
of my writing, but there’s no stopping AI. With that said…
Salvation is still a choice…Big thx for your insights, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
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This is interesting. It has a turn of the century vibe to me for some reason. Like someone standing in a crowd, but the only person getting the whole scenario’s message from the one on stage. Your use of powerful words makes it impactful, but not bloated. Great job Crims.