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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreP=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....
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Thank you Cuz:))
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nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
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Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
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I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
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Thank you Kay-1
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I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
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Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
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All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
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It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
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Brandon Houser wrote a new post
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Read MoreJust like the onesWho choose the joy rideI'll walk in circlesNear the landslideTo meet the winnersOn the flip sideAnd find the losersWhere the night hidesWith searchers waitingOn the sunriseEngulfed by heavenFrom the high tidesLooking for meaningWhere the waves cryAlone...
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Poems about the sky and water. I enjoy. This is a nice read
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Glad you read it Fia. I got really free in the writing, but I enjoyed the ride. 🙂
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hello Brandon this is really deep I think we are on similar wavelengths tonight ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brandon. Excellent write with a fun vibe and amazing flow my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love the this. This had me swaying and relating to the words. I agree keep these coming.
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Hey Fia! I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it! 🙏
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics as always my friend. Your flow and wordplay are simply amazing. Love the reggae vibe it accompanied your words smoothly. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 🙏 Reggae always lifts my spirits.
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Thank you so much Gus! 🙏
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreI killed a rat not happy about that,but what other choice did I have?It wouldn't just leave of its own accord.It had found a nice cosy place in my home,a place to set up house and breed.I'm sorry your life...
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It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.
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Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
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Interesting take on Eden. I like this
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. I concur with Fia.. None the less this is an excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian