Inside the mystic garden
Forever enticed
By silent trails of eden
Hungry for the hidden taste
Of knowledge unseen
In fruits already eaten
What fools are we to linger
Where the burn still aches
Searching for a place to slay
Drifting still from heaven’s hand
Far away from home
Naked, with no place to play
Interesting take on Eden. I like this
Powerfully penned, Brandon. I concur with Fia.. None the less this is an excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian