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Read MoreI watched another sun come upAnd another sun has setAs shadows lengthen into the nightBut nights no darker than the dayAnd my lifeBoth good and badLies wasted in the stainThe feeling of lostWhich cradles me now in emptinessAnd for...
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The beauty of love is all that we imagine. The death of love is never what we thought.
Thank you for reading (my writes often ramble), and sharing your thoughts and compliments with me.Here’s to the sweetness of the dream. 🍻 Cheers!
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Glad to share my summer and my Joe speak with you. Its funny that one day pain doesn’t hurt anymore, except sometimes. But if it didn’t hurt, was love really real?
To summer! 🍻 cheers!
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Average Joe started the topic Memorial Day in the forum Underground Caverns
“If Your Reading This” by Tim McGraw
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Read MoreThen Meg paused as she gazed into Daniel's blue eyes pleading, "I hope you have something to soothe the pain, baby." Then she playfully nugded her nose against his, then leaned in for a kiss but playfully...
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That’s a lot of action for a parking lot, babe!
I have to tell you that I LOVE sweaty sex. One of my favorite memories is losing power during a thunderstorm and getting fucked in the bedroom with the window up… rain pouring in on the carpet, but we just didn’t care. It was hot and humid as shit. No air conditioning. No fans. Soaking the bed in perspiration. Glistening. Banging like animals.And your finger has been up my ass for a while. Maybe you better suck it clean.
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Oh that’s hott. Wait till tomorrow for part four, more action in the parking lot under the lightning storm hehe. And you gave me an idea in your comment about my next short story.
Maybe I should have tasted more of yoy on my finger! Surprise coming!
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Read MoreLike Someone's PetquaternChained to this tree, like someone's pet I'm collared, naked, cold and wet My Mistress snuggles warm in bed To please her stud and give him headOnce wealthy, now I'm cursed to be Chained to this tree,...
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Oh, this was good – and formal poetry no less! Wow! I’m impressed.
I’m very familiar with cucking. I tie my hubby to a chair and make him watch.
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Well thanks!
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Nicely done… love the repetition… a nagging reminder…
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Read MoreA fierce and dreadful mistress you can beYou force your will upon me, wielding painNonetheless, I love you! Oh, my queen!In your sadistic keep, yet, I remainYour torture play is keen to hone my mindThe carnal tension far exceeds...
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Well yeah, let me get out my leather and be right back, Reggie.
Get that Mallard out of here!(I’m a fan of Sonnets as well)
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Some “birds” I like more than others…
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Joe, that is just breathtaking. What an incredible catharsis. I’ve read many things about the disintegration of love, the falling away – but never anything so utterly raw and weeping as this. Such detail and emotion. The final freedom you describe is so anticlimactic, so real in its hollowness. The wound is so visible, the pain so palpable.
Second person narrative is hugely effective here. It magnifies the emotion of your piece considerably.