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Read MoreThe shadow I cast at night, is that of my soul on fire. The shadows of my passion, cast onto the faces of others. The shadow of a tall flame, one that rises the more it consumes. The shadows within… cast themselves...
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A true fan you are! Appreciate you!
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Read MoreAre we gazing into the mere moments we have left? Not into each other's eyes, rather into the only time we have left? Rather than moments, let's gaze on into many years ahead! When we’re old and still in-love…
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreGhetto Lions Her lover man, drunk on romance,is led by her down skid row.He is a sad-eyed prophet of gloomwho topples imaginary kingdomsin his game of emotional chess.He never quite captures the king. He hugs her, his angel of midnight dreams.His...
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Intriguing write, John. This piece has layers and lots of depth my friend. Amazing imagery and storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I am most grateful for your seeing into the layers within this piece. And also very grateful for your appreciation of the imagery and storytelling in my poem. I appreciate you too, very much.
John
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Tremendous work. Powerful and vivid. Excellent.
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Thank you so much Thomas. Very much appreciated your observations on my poem. Very grateful.
John
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This is so worth reading. The grittiness and inner searching, as well as a lonely desire dresses this up nice. I get a real California children of the night feel to this. So well done. Great poem.
Did you mean as he combs her golden tresses?
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Thank you so much Tim. You did see into the heart of my poem with a keen insight into its meaning. Love your words here. You have brought joy into my night. And yes I did indeed meaning he combs. Thank you so much for pointing that out. You really helped a lot with that. Have a great night.
John
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Read MoreThe dawn was new, the day was fresh Life filled with endless possibilities The sun had lit a path of successUntil temptation overshadowed susceptibilities This storm was brewing with humility An internal chaos hidden and unknownColliding rising temps of instability Boiling before the stones...
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Deep, makes the mind wonder what the sun is revealing.
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Thank you..tried writing a poem with layered multiple meanings.. didn’t quite come out as I 1st envisioned but sometimes you have 2 go where rm the words take you
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Read MoreIn my mind's subconscious There was a peaceful calmness Then life's reality crept upon us Dark thoughts haunting and ominous The horizon once clear and endless But loved one's deaths left me senseless From this heartache I am defenseless Alone in this world now friendless My confused...
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Reversing evolution, Damn. This has a nice flow to it. Enjoyed this.
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Thank you..glad u enjoyed..hope all is well
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Yes, thank you
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Thats good to hear..haven’t been on here much recently..been super busy..I need to catch up on everyone’s writing
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Powerfully authentic, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian